Got a Light - Chapter 23

May 15, 2008 10:33

Thanks to my beta mel39 who always finds my oopses in the nick of time.
Thanks also to 60schic for the readthrough and the vote of confidence.

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malinr May 15 2008, 15:34:50 UTC
What, WHAT do you mean "He had no idea what happened next."? Does something happen to him? Run over by a car, getting mugged ending up in a hospital? Are you going to throw more gravel in there relationship? Love this update. Hugs

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loracj May 15 2008, 21:03:53 UTC
I don't have it in me to hurt Ryan. Plenty of other writers enjoy that and do it much better than I could.
But they do have to figure things out.

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brandywine421 May 15 2008, 15:44:30 UTC
Oh, the angst! ♥ I love that Frankie accidentally got drunk and how the whole exchange went down. This is great.

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loracj May 15 2008, 21:05:05 UTC
Brandy! You read my story! YAYS!
I figured the only way she'd be able to confront him is if she was wasted. There is something to be said for liquid courage, even if she got all mushy at the end.

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fredsmith518 May 15 2008, 17:36:05 UTC
“I had sunglasses,” I said. “I don’t know what I did with them.”

He reached on top of my head and pulled them off for me. heh! and most angsty at the end, you'll have to update soon!

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loracj May 15 2008, 21:05:52 UTC
Hey, that's happened to me more than once, so I'm sure after a few beers, I'd be scouring the area looking for them.

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loracj May 15 2008, 21:06:47 UTC
Their communication skills definitely need work, eh? What now, indeed.

As for writing him hot (thanks for that), I write him how I want him. Hee.

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helen_c May 15 2008, 17:58:56 UTC
Hee, well, that's one communication issue resolved.

Now, where do they go from there?? :)

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loracj May 15 2008, 21:08:31 UTC
I wonder.........................

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