Seth's Master Plan - Chapter 1

Jun 12, 2008 11:40

earlier stuff here

ETA - oops - copied Fred's title inadvertently - apologies
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chazper June 14 2008, 19:47:57 UTC
The first of my catching-up-with-fic, and what a wonderful one to start with! I always wanted a costume party episode on the show (pouts that we never got to see Halloween), but since that's impossible a story is the next best thing--No, actually it's even better. Josh would have screwed it up, but you won't. I already adored Seth's sweet-talk stuffed conversation with Summer and then his had-to-listen-for-a-change one with Taylor. The mention of Cal was a sweet and poignant surprise and you got Bullitt's folksiness down perfectly. Now, of course, I'm just anxious to hear how Ryan reacts. I suspect that a death-glare is in Seth's near future.

God, I love Chrismukkah in June!

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loracj June 14 2008, 20:29:59 UTC
Well, it was your sentence that inspired me.....

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jonsmom14 June 15 2008, 18:14:51 UTC
I'm really curious what Seth's got up his sleeve. Ryan's pretty quick to spot Seth's BS. This is really great. I also got a story idea from one of your musings and wondered if you were planning to use it. I really like the idea of Bullit and Caleb meeting. Do you mind if I run with it?

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loracj June 15 2008, 19:59:25 UTC
It's nothing too elaborate - Seth has to hedge his bets, after all.
As for Bullit and Caleb, it's all yours. I think it will make an interesting story. I don't mind at all.

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