Seth's Master Plan - Chapter 5

[loracj]

Special thanks to fredsmith518 for her assistance in finding an ending for this. She helped me to find a way out, and gets all the credit.

Dedicated to chazper for her sentence, and to mel39 for the challenge.

Comments

[fredsmith518]

I loved this story from the get go, such a funny concept, lovely execution, well done:)

[loracj]

Thanks, Fred...and your ending made it right.

[katwoman76]

Aw. Taylor knew exactly how to get Ryan to agree.
He would do anything for Sophie. Best big brother ever.

[loracj]

Yeah, I wish we could have seen more of Ryan and Sophie.

[ryanforever]

It just occured to me when I was reading this, that Ryan has a history of wearing costumes. He was Snoopy afterall. Maybe Seth could have tried using that to blackmail him with.
But Taylor mentioning Sophie showed that she really does know our boy well. He couldn't disappoint his little sister - EVER!
It's an interesting thought to imagine what else Sophie could get him to do that no one else could. I imagine the list would be endless.

[marsalka]

I am a sucker for sap! So cute, and I love that Seth got a picture. I also liked this description "Sophie crashed, slumping in a tiny brown heap on Ryan’s feet", hee.

[loracj]

That one was Fred's. She was instrumental in the ending.
Glad there are other sap lovers out there.

[kazfloyd]

Of course Ryan would do, with a reward from Taylor and he would never want to dissappoint Sophie. Great line! Ryan would be a great big brother.

Thanks for sharing. I hope you do write a sequel.

[loracj]

I'm glad you liked it. I will attempt a sequel at some point; I have a few other writing obligations first.