The Fruit Car

Sep 13, 2005 19:57

This is my very first English paper that I have to turn in, it's on a memorable event, so I wanted to share it with you guys because of that and it's about when me and Alice became friends. Tell me if you see something that needs adjusting ( Read more... )

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lazy_sunshine September 13 2005, 19:53:38 UTC
you make me so happy, lursa. i'ma call you right now.

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lorax_lovin September 13 2005, 20:25:14 UTC
and you did! yay!

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shacreema September 14 2005, 16:44:32 UTC
that is one of the sweetest things i've ever read!

i teared up...

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alphagato September 15 2005, 20:50:37 UTC
And the two of you rode off into the sunset on your fruit car.... That was beautiful! And don't take it the wrong way when I say that I didn't realize you were such a talented writer! I always knew you were smart and funny and pretty and a good friend to Alice, but you never let on about this... I'm very proud of your skills and I hope to read more of your work someday.

Thank you. Thank you for writing that story and giving Alice a chance.

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