(Untitled)

[lord_harrymort]

Artist: My friend Susan.
Title: Untitled
Characters: Harry, Ron, Random Death Eater and Snape
Rating: G
Media used: Computer tablet and photoshop.
Challenge: Nope
Concrit?: Sure!
Warnings: Poor Japanese, pathetic attempts at humor, large image...
Notes/comments: Please excuse the poor Japanese as this is for a class project. It’s meant to only

Comments

[sukiame]

CUTE! *loves wonwon*

FYI, all names and anything that sounds non-Japanese (ie Okay) should be in Katakana, so, Ron Weasley = ロン　ウェーズリー。Also... I would use うっています instead of　うれします but that's really up to you I suppose.
Box 6 should probably be 今は十時です。(ima wa juu ji desu) クラスへ行きます。(kurasu e ikimasu) though... I keep wanting to put Snape in informal speech instead of polite speech and imagine him saying: "十時だろう！行け！"
Yeah... I'm gonna stop nit picking now. (Box 8 should be その、Instead of　この cos harry is holding the apple, not ron =D *bricked*)

[lord_harrymort]

I thought that about the names, but Susan insisted on using Hiragana. I'll poke her again though.

As for box 6? I can't believe I forgot the 'wa' and 'ji'! FAIL! I actually knew that one! As for the other bit? We haven't learned that yet so I kind of made it up. =P

Thank god for your nitpicking. It's better for us to know then for our teach to be like, 'yea, it's decent' *pass*.

Have I told you recently how much I love you?

[sukiame]

No you didn't but it's nice to be loved~

[lord_harrymort]

I love youuuuuuuuu!!
Thank you for your help!

Also... I would use うっています instead of　うれします but that's really up to you I suppose.

This particular sentance I had to ask my teacher about and that's what he gave me. What's the difference?

[user_undefined]

zomgwtf. XD ワンーワンの日本語は少し変だけどえが好き。^^

ハーリーかわいいな！

[the_suit_case]

: )!