New Story

[lord_zhugeliang]

Well I wrote a new story for creative writing. The assignment was to make a story that heavily features a place, and after getting some inspiration from an episode of Darker than Black I came upon this little work. Cut for LEEEEENNNGGGTTTTTHHHHHHHH.

Comments

[infernox14]

tl;dr

[lord_zhugeliang]

Saying tl;dr to a short story is like saying "Sorry Shakespeare, I love your sonnets and plays but if you could get them down to like..a twitter update, that would be fantastic."

Douche.

[infernox14]

Bwahahahaha

[albino_ftw]

I liked this. I don't know if you meant to do this, but it seemed like a flashback. Like Coll was remembering this memory of his grandfather. And I think it's funny that the most important part was the part you said you rushed. XD

[lord_zhugeliang]

Yeah well it was 30 minutes before class and while it was the most important I needed to get the story done. Turns out we had a shortened class so I didn't need to finish it but meh. I am going to touch it up a bit for next class. The part of Darker than Black that I got inspired from was indeed a flashback so you saying that makes me happy <3