Your descriptions all sound pretty good to me. For the first line of Dreams Made Flesh I think I'd rephrase it as something like, "Given form, dreams walk the city streets. Nightmares wait, stalking you from each dark corner." but I'm also a sucker for short sentences, so you can feel free to ignore me.
I'd be happy to play any or all of your play tests. If you find yourself in need of adventure game fans for The Dark Cavern I can dig up two or three that would probably be amused. ;)
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Always there if you need a tester, buddy.
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I'd be happy to play any or all of your play tests. If you find yourself in need of adventure game fans for The Dark Cavern I can dig up two or three that would probably be amused. ;)
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