Balance: A drabble in about 20 minutes

[lordofmeh]

Day awoke, sleepy and warm. It was the hour of birds and bakers and the occasional ambitious newspaper delivery boy. The morning light over Konoha was filtered and hazy as the air painted dew on the smallest insect and the largest building alike, and the hush of night still lingered in the shadowed streets.
One place the "hush of night" had already

Comments

[unjaundiced]

That oversexed rat... Both of them. XD I'll bet those neighbours of their were listening with cups pressed to the wall, nosebleeding all over the floor.

Just a note: Maybe change 'he' to 'Kakashi' in this >> "He drove into Iruka mercilessly" otherwise.. it sounds like it's all Iruka and that implies soooo many other things. XD

[lordofmeh]

Hahaha! EMT arrives at the neighbour's apartment going "oh geez, not again."
I give you love-cookies for the note. We don't want Iruka penis-pretzel. Or maybe we do...

[unjaundiced]

Pffffffft Iruka penis-pretzel sounds like a crazy puzzle inspired by Icha Icha. That is not right! It is very not right! XD

Ya... Konoha's emergency service brings janitors everywhere they go. You know basically everyone in Konoha is a pervert. XD

[seranni]

Very nice! Enjoyed this quite a bit.

[lordofmeh]

Hooray! I was kinda regretting posting this since it was written super-quick, but if you liked it then it was totally worth it ^_^ Thanks!

[yes_rhade]

Sorry it took me a while to read this one, but it was great. I loved the idea of balancing.

[lordofmeh]

I do, too, but in hindsight, I probably should have spent more than 20 minutes on it cuz I'm not sure that it really comes through here. ^_^;; I'm really glad you liked it, though :D I promise to actually put some effort into it next time!