From Let me learn you. to A spider billows by the window; my breath couples yours in off-beat rhythms, and languishes. is amazing, amazing, amazing.
Also, the last line is heartbreaking and the way that you managed to reorganize that sequence is right, just right. It's more balanced now. Good job, Janabie.
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Also, the last line is heartbreaking and the way that you managed to reorganize that sequence is right, just right. It's more balanced now. Good job, Janabie.
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