Comments | lorelei_lynn: Old Fic

lorelei_lynn

Old Fic

Mar 21, 2007 19:30

Posting for omniocular's March "Something Old" challenge ( Read more... )

Comments 12

sreya March 30 2007, 18:49:15 UTC

Oh, very nicely crafted. I could certainly see this as a story buried in Black family history. Think I'll go looking for that other fic!

lorelei_lynn April 1 2007, 15:15:59 UTC

Glad you liked it!

maireadinish March 30 2007, 20:00:16 UTC

Oh very nice. I love how you brought in Phineas Nigellus into the the story. I find him to be a character of great potential and it's nice to see such an interesting perspective on JK's world.

lorelei_lynn April 1 2007, 15:18:17 UTC

Thanks! Keeping PN in character was one of my worries when I wrote this.

seaislewitch March 30 2007, 20:29:09 UTC

Good story!

lorelei_lynn April 1 2007, 15:18:25 UTC

Thanks!

lyras March 30 2007, 21:25:42 UTC

Oh, very nice, and a good Phineas, too! I especially liked this line: "as if he were trying to put his nose through the canvas".

lorelei_lynn April 1 2007, 15:18:43 UTC

That's one of my favorite lines, too. Thanks.

dolabellae March 30 2007, 23:05:01 UTC

I love good tapestry! fic, and this feels spot on, as well as being beautifully written. Poor Marius - will definitely have to read the rest to see what happens to him.

lorelei_lynn April 1 2007, 15:21:33 UTC

Thanks. I did end up giving Marius a happy ending.