New Story Intro - Feedback Appreciated

[lorelei_o]

When my inner voice tells a story, it always start with “once upon a time.”

Once upon a time there was a princess…

Once upon a time there was an evil king…

Once upon a time there was an industrial analyst with a bad comb-over… When I deteriorate to stories that start, “Once upon a time there was a plumber who couldn’t

Comments

[lorelei_o]

Nope. That is definitely NOT my nose. Damnit.

[wordweaverlynn]

I love this. It's wonderful.

[lorelei_o]

Thank you very much. I'll keep at it.

[bkhager]

I want whatever you're having! ;)
Okay
Two or three questions
new husband?? Did I miss something? Or is this just part of the story?
And where are the cats in the story???
I love you!

[lorelei_o]

Hee...

No you didn't miss anything. Michael and I aren't married - we can't afford to be, the tax implications are too nasty.

The story is about 2/3rds fictionalized. I started with some of my internal voice, and then manipulated my life around it so it's actually fiction. I'm liking it so far, but it's mostly snippets. I don't know if there's any real plot yet.

[bkhager]

*whew*
I know I've been out of touch BUT

[lorelei_o]

*snort*

I don't do that...

[catku]

I love your brain...covet really...well not "covet.covet"
but you know what I mean.

And MOTHER OF GOD I miss you desperately.

I could hear your voice telling this and I started to cry.at.work.

*sigh*

[lorelei_o]

awww...*snif*

Big giant lemon covered chiffon hugs.

Miss you too.