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superseal January 31 2010, 21:13:02 UTC
This was written perfectly :)

Well done Lori ;)

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lorib12 January 31 2010, 23:22:35 UTC
What an awesome comment :) Thanks so much for that! Also, I've been going through what I've missed on my f-list and I am excited about reading your prequel to a sequel (I think that's the name). Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!!!

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superseal January 31 2010, 23:25:59 UTC
Yup, that's the one! For some reason, I just love writing House crying and being held together by Wilson :)

You're very welcome!

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srsly_yes January 31 2010, 21:33:27 UTC
This is so bittersweet. Blending House's loss with his memories made me tear up. Using "Prophet" Jagger's words provided the perfect ending. Beautiful.

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lorib12 January 31 2010, 23:24:57 UTC
I couldn't resist tying in the pilot with my speculation ending with Jagger. Actually the whole fic was written around that one line. I'm glad that the emotions came through for House, I've been working on improving that each time I write and with this piece it was especially important. Thanks so much for the kind words and for reading :)

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murgy31 January 31 2010, 21:57:21 UTC
Seriously well done. I loved it.

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lorib12 January 31 2010, 23:26:15 UTC
Why thanks so much :) It was heartbreaking to think about writing it because I really don't want it to happen, but I'm glad it worked for what I was trying to get across. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!!

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lorib12 January 31 2010, 23:27:18 UTC
Yes, they can never seem to get it together can they? I'm so glad you loved it even though it was a sad concept. THanks so much for the kind words and for reading :)

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tinarebekka January 31 2010, 22:08:55 UTC
There's much truth in that one. I liked it. :-)

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lorib12 January 31 2010, 23:28:30 UTC
I'm so glad you thought so. I figure at the rate their going on the show, the only way they'll ever be honest with one another is if there dead or dying. Men, such hard heads!! Thanks so much for reading and commenting :)

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