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lorien_eve

Fic: Summer Storms

Sep 05, 2004 00:17

This is in response to the "Epic Journey" challenge.

Title: Summer Storms
Author: Lorien_Eve
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own either one of these beautiful boys. J.K. Rowling has that honor.

( Summer Storms )

Comments 4

dentedsky September 5 2004, 18:42:44 UTC

This is such a beautiful fic, and so sad! I loved that special touch you have with the moon, wind and storm, and the way Harry would predict it, that was so creative. You have such a way with anticipation, like the drips of the rain on the tin roof and then Harry kisses him like they've been waiting for ever to do it. Not a big fan of this pairing, but you made it work me. Thumbs up, baby.

danbi October 31 2004, 05:38:03 UTC

Okay, so I read the sequel before I read this but I must say that this was beautifully done as well. I like the way you describe things, from the way you tune the dialogue (not too long and to the point) to the way you describe the interactions between Harry and Ron. The build-up is awesome and at a nice pace.

Thank you.

thewatch March 13 2005, 22:53:32 UTC

This is so sweet, and it makes me cry.

I love all the sequals to it as well, though I can't seem to find Fall Leaves anywhere at the moment.

Your work that I've read so far always seems to make my heart ache for them. I hope their future will turn out to be happier than this.

Great and moving writing though. Thanks

lorien_eve March 14 2005, 00:58:17 UTC

Oh, wow, thanks! I really appreciate your feedback!

I know the stories are very sad. It surprises me that I even wrote them, considering I probably wouldn't have read them myself. I get way too emotional over Harry (and Ron), so I avoid the angsty ones and the ones with character death. My heart aches for them, too, and I can only hope that JKR will be kinder than I was.

Here is a link to "Fall Leaves":
http://www.livejournal.com/community/harry_and_ron/111843.html