Fic: The Four Loves

[lorien_eve]

Title: The Four Loves
Author: Lorien_Eve
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "The ones who love us never truly leave us."
Warnings: The biggest warning is character death. There is a small bit of implied het, but it's mostly just a misunderstanding between Harry and Ron.
Disclaimer: In my dreams, I own Harry and Ron. In reality,

Comments

[joymaro]

::pout::

::sniff::

::sob::

::WAIL::

You can't!!!!!!! nonononononononononono!!!

Oh geesh... if this happens for real (HP=horcrux), I think i might just fly to England just to slap JKR silly.

You're so bad. I hate you. not really, but you're still bad... this was good, but you're so bad!

[lorien_eve]

I know I'm bad, but JKR is worse. I just write fanfiction, but her work is canon. I can totally see this happening in book seven, and that's what really worries me.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

[bruisesonguitar]

I'm terrified that this is going to come true in canon :'(

fantastic plot though.

great fic.

[lorien_eve]

Yes, I'm very afraid that this is going to be what Harry faces in book seven. That's why I needed to write about it, kind of deal with it on my own before it actually happens in canon.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

[slytherhyme]

This is written simply wonderfully. The plot flows so smoothly, and the characters remain themselves throughout it all. What I love about it is how everything falls into place, without any trouble. It just sort of is.

I love this passage in particular:

He kissed like he did everything else, with all of his heart. I felt his arms around my neck and his body pressed to mine, and I knew that he’d been wanting me for as long as I’d been wanting him. This time, we really did kiss until we were breathless. My hands grasped for every part of him, and in between kisses, he chanted my name. If I could relive one moment in my life, it would be this night. Now I know why they make Pensives. The only things I would question are: why is Hagrid the Gryffindor Head of House? Couldn't McGonagall stay Headmistress and Head? Harry and Ginny started going out, but how come there was no mention of how they went out before? Judging by the fact that this is set afetr Harry knows about the Horcruxes, they would be in seventh year by now. Why did Harry

[lorien_eve]

Thanks so much for the feedback! And thanks for the concrit, too. I always welcome suggestions.

I made Hagrid Head of Gryffindor just because I wanted him to be. I think it's a possibility for book seven, and it seems like with all the recent developments, McGonagall will have her hands full as Headmistress.

As for Harry and Ginny in HBP...it's like what happened to Sirius in OotP. I refuse to accept it. It never happened. Although my beta *did* suggest that I mention/explain it in the author's notes. Maybe I should've listened to her. :)

Thanks again for taking the time to reply. I really appreciate your compliments and suggestions. :)

[bugthrasher]

God
this is really good. love the style you wrote it in too...so sad though, and perfectly writen. It makes the reader cry, and that's a good thing! I'd love to see more of your work.

[lorien_eve]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, even though it was sad. I'm so afraid this is going to happen in book seven, so after I read HBP, I had to sit down and write this.

I've got a few stories posted on my lj, if you're interested in some others. And if you don't mind me pimping my website, here's a link. ;)
http://www.geocities.com/simpleadorationtwo/

Thanks again for the feedback! : )

[thesailorbitch]

Fuck ... me.

That is just so sad. :(

I hope to god this doesn;t happen, well you could sue JKR if she does ;)

and a nudge for "not necess..." yes, *poke*