Obscure & British Comment Fest

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Change in Condition

[el_staplador]

'My dear Thomas!' the former Lord Mountararat exclaimed. 'What on earth are you doing?'

Lord Tolloller (as was) regarded him with affected nonchalance, from his inverted position suspended from a cobweb. 'Merely adjusting to my new condition,' he murmured. 'I had hoped to master the art in privacy...'

'Come, come, Thomas - we were at school together; you need keep no secrets from me,' Mountararat said. 'By the way, your left foot is caught in that thread there, and you'd do better if you folded your wings before trying to right yourself

Re: Change in Condition

[dbskyler]

OMG, this is made of win!

this past quarter of an hour has hardly seemed ten minutes!

LOL!

Re: Change in Condition

[el_staplador]

Thank you!

Re: Change in Condition

[morganmuffle]

I absolutely love the idea of their quarter hours only seeming like ten minutes :D

Re: Change in Condition

[el_staplador]

Thank you! Very British, understatement, what.

Re: Change in Condition

[cactusonastair]

Oh my, I'm so exceedingly happy to see my request fulfilled! You did a tremendous job with it! It rings so true to G&S and yet there are clever little hints of more things that would never be allowed on stage! Thank you for this! I love it!

Re: Change in Condition

[el_staplador]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.