Obscure & British Commentfest 2016

May 07, 2016 09:18

Welcome to the Obscure & British comment fest IV! This is a comment fest for any small(ish) British fandom and open to all fanworks.


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Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. count_nickula May 9 2016, 07:14:00 UTC
(I laughed for about 5 million minutes at your prompt, I hope I've managed to do it some small justice!)

>>>Steel, I'm detecting an ethereal presence, there's definitely something odd about this place.<<
Sapphire walked slowly around the floor of the department store, scanning the shoppers and staff, listening intently to something unknown. >>Time early 1970s. Building mid 19th century, refurbished in the '20s, then further in the '50s.... )

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. lost_spook May 9 2016, 07:59:14 UTC
:lol That was great! :-)

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. count_nickula May 10 2016, 08:36:26 UTC
Thanks, I think your icon sums it all up! <3

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. spikesgirl58 May 9 2016, 12:03:42 UTC
Oh, this is brilliant and I fall to my knees in helpless laughter. I could not have asked for anything more and I can just seem the look on Steel's face.

Tremendous job - thank you from the bottom of my S&S/AYBS heart! - May I either link or repost this in the S&S community (giving you full credit, of course)?

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. count_nickula May 10 2016, 08:35:17 UTC
It was an absolute pleasure to write, but I'll never look at Steel's suits the same way again, alas. I've also been having flashbacks to 70s tv since last night, so thanks for that. ;)

Yes, feel free to link or repost!

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. spikesgirl58 May 10 2016, 11:46:22 UTC
Thanks so much! I have reposted in my journal and to the sapphire_steel community.

You are so very welcome and thanks a hundred times more! :D

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. timelessapeel May 9 2016, 13:21:18 UTC
Ha, ha, this is brilliant! I love Steel's reaction--he knows something's not quite right, but he just can't quite put his finger on it.

Does anyone at the store think that Sapphire bears a striking resemblance to Miss French the perfume saleswoman (or any of Joanna Lumley's other guest roles) I wonder?

But the real question is: How did Steel pay for those suits? Do elements have expense accounts? ;-)

This was brilliantly funny. Thank you!

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. count_nickula May 10 2016, 09:11:52 UTC
Thanks!

I suspect Steel didn't even consider the idea of payment and Silver flitted in, conjured up some cash from a few spare buttons, a half-used biro, and a hairclip, slipped the money in Steel's pocket and flittered away again!

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. timelessapeel May 10 2016, 13:03:50 UTC
Sounds perfectly plausible to me! Knowing Silver, he was probably watching the show and having a good laugh about it. More than worth conjuring up some money for. ;-)

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. liadtbunny May 9 2016, 14:26:08 UTC
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!

Bravo:)

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. count_nickula May 10 2016, 09:14:34 UTC
Cheers!

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. farad May 9 2016, 20:24:28 UTC
Wickedly good! And very nicely done - thanks for sharing!

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. count_nickula May 10 2016, 09:15:38 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. <3

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grey853 May 10 2016, 15:59:25 UTC
Nice job.

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Re: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. ragnarok_08 May 10 2016, 18:51:24 UTC
This was fantastic <333

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RE: Sapphire and Steel/Are You Being Served, Steel + Mr. Humphries, A Very Hard Sale. sidhe_uaine42 May 10 2016, 23:40:47 UTC
It's a good thing that I wasn't drinking my Irish cream-flavoured cocoa when I read this story because the campus computer lab monitors frown on cocoa - infused spit on the electronics. I was laughing so hard that I was crying. You captured Mr. Humphries perfectly!

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