Obscure & British Commentfest 2016

[lost_spook]

Welcome to the Obscure & British comment fest IV! This is a comment fest for any small(ish) British fandom and open to all fanworks.

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No Way Out

[spikesgirl58]

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Sapphire shot a fast look out of their hiding spot. <>

She waited for Steel to answer her, but her partner simply stared at the ground in front of him. He seemed so dejected. Steel did not like to lose.

<> Again, there was no response. “Steel

Re: No Way Out

[spikesgirl58]

I hope so. There are still so many stories in me left to tell!

Re: No Way Out

[liadtbunny]

Clever! I'd like to know what happened next:) I particularly liked how you showed the shift by having Steel lose his telepathic link with Sapphire.

Re: No Way Out

[spikesgirl58]

I'm so glad you liked it. I've had a lot of other people make the same comment. I might just have to do something about it. Thanks for reading!