Hearts on Fire - ch.07

Jul 11, 2012 11:01

Title: Hearts on Fire
Author: Kate
Beta: therecklessgirl

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juntoshi, kate's, sho-chan, one fire, chaptered, riida, aiba-chan, nino, jun-pon

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eiko_lotus July 11 2012, 09:47:40 UTC
oh, this is so sweet... *wiping my tears of happiness
is it true, only one left? too bad, this story so good.
Thanks for writing... ^_^

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silver_crystall July 13 2012, 21:24:59 UTC
I'm glad you liked it so much!

Yeah, sadly there is just one chapter left and I hoe you'll like it!

Thank you for leaving a comment! <3

(I still have to comment on your last JunToshi story, I loved it!)

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caramelo5 July 11 2012, 11:21:50 UTC
waa, how cute! Idon´t belive there is only one chapter left, can´t wait to read it!

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silver_crystall July 13 2012, 21:26:38 UTC
:) They are cute, I have to agree xD

Yeah...just one left, but I'm glad you're still looking forward!
See you next week then^^

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vicco_vicky July 11 2012, 11:29:55 UTC
OMG!!!!!!!!!

Such a cute and lovely love confession!!*.* <3 The first part with "I don't need money [...] I just need you!" a cute ans a direct confession, but the las part with the "I love you more than anything els in the world, stay by my side forever and for the rest of my live"... waaaaaa <3<3
And yes, Jun has lucky than Ohno is his servant, but Masaki will stay with Sho forever too!!!! Now they're together in Sho's room!!! Sho love Masaki so much!!!!<3<3

I'm here again!!! hehehe xD Thanks for your hard work and waiting for the next. Sad the next is the last chapter...T.T But waiting for others fics! bye, bye^^

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silver_crystall July 13 2012, 21:31:04 UTC
Hi *waves*

You're here xD

Jun really loves Ohno a lot and he could finally say it. And he did it in such an honest way. I would have cried too^^

I'm sure Sho will wrack his brain until he finds a way to have the boy that is looking for the horses staying in his room. Maybe from his window he can see the horses in a better way LOL

I'm sad as well that the next one will be the last chapter. It was fun to put them into this setting and it's even more fun to read all your comments and thoughts about it!
Thank you! <3

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adeyakana July 11 2012, 12:04:06 UTC
aahhh... it's so sweet :3
finally Jun said love to Ohno <3
and I'm glad nothing happen with Ohno
like this chapter~~
thank you for this ^^

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silver_crystall July 13 2012, 21:33:14 UTC
Thank you for reading and leaving the comment!
It would have been terrible if something would have happened to Ohno...Jun would be crashed. I couldn't let that happen!

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nexalchemist July 11 2012, 12:29:02 UTC
a power that he never had experienced
Jun really strong for his lover
and ending of this part is so sweet ^^

If it don't bother you too much, can you divide some of your long paragraph to 2-3 paragraph because sometimes it quite hard to read
Thank you ^^

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silver_crystall July 13 2012, 21:36:35 UTC
Yes, Jun gathers a lot more strength from his love than he knows. Being together with Ohno is good for him (although it keeps him busy LOL)

He was very honest withhis confession and that's why it turned out that way...

Oh, I'm sorry, I'll try. I usually don't do it that much when I write it in the document, cause I think it divides the context too much, but if it's hard to read I'll try my best to add a few line breaks. I might forget it soon though, then please remember me again, I won't be mad^^

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nexalchemist July 14 2012, 03:18:32 UTC
OK I will
Thank you ^^

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