easily your best work, the rhymes are natural and nuanced and the subject matter complex. I think though, the capitalizations are excessive, but that's a minor quibble. good work.
in line 11, i would go with "weighed" by sin line 16 is slightly awkward, maybe something polysyndetonic like: who sinned, and (verb), and fell. something of that nature.
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line 16 is slightly awkward, maybe something polysyndetonic like: who sinned, and (verb), and fell. something of that nature.
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