Autumn girl

[lost_shadowwolf]

Youv heard of summer girls

Comments

[a_song_of_stone]

ok i absolutely love this poem kimmi...its my new favourite!

[lost_shadowwolf]

Im glad you enjoyed! It was burning in my head for a day before jumping out at 1 somthing in the morning

[meri_sielu]

That is a stunning poem, I like it better then Summer Girl, which is awesome too but not as awesome as this one :)

[dustmoon]

You've made a real step up in your poetry over the last couple of months.

I like the... It's not quite intertextuality, but that's the closest word I can think of. Taking a step back, it's like a surreal take on an Abercrombie & Fitch A/W catalog.

I also particularly like the first line of the penultimate stanza.

[lost_shadowwolf]

Why thank you much so. Yeah reading it back when I thought of her clothing it did have an odd fashion photo shoot with bite edge to it, random.

I like this (and summer girl) so much I have this constant want to break it down, line by line and analyze it like I used to do in English, but I wont because that would be abit sad.

Also the inspiration for this poem is your fault, I cant remember what it is you said but it triggered this story in my head.