From the diary of Devin Baxter.

[wing_fetish]

(13 year old Devin Baxter sits down on the edge of the beach, running his toes into the sand. He sighs, plopping down onto his back, staring into the sky for a minute or so. Finally, he sits up and opens up his backpack - he pulls out a sketchbook, flipping through messy sketches of the superheroes that have always kept him company. He takes out

Comments

[morbidmuse]

Wonderfully done! Very realistic character. I like how you didn't make the person one sided but he has actual flaws that make sense. My favorite line was "I’m still trying to figure out if I’m lucky or not." That line just seemed so realistic. Really great job.

[wing_fetish]

Ah, thanks so much! I'm really glad you like it. ^^