[x]Just putting my story here for l8r...needs to print @ home...its long![x]

Mar 07, 2006 09:22


Happenstance

By: Curtis Schuler

Crash!"Dammit!" he exclaimed.

"Would you like to buy another one dear?"

"Uh…well, I only have like 12 bucks left."

"Hmm, well, I’ll give you a little discount," she handed him a London-Air bag, "have a nice flight deary" she said warmly. James walked away from the little shop carrying a bag with a wrapped parcel ( Read more... )

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watchasifall March 7 2006, 14:48:09 UTC
That was great!

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lost_xcentric March 7 2006, 21:25:58 UTC
:p im takin this off! i didnt want to send it to me...and its screwed up a bit...BUT THXX!

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never_frugal March 8 2006, 05:33:16 UTC
OMG! you rock, after reading the first paragraph, WHOA! thankyou.

sorry, i have to go to dinner now, but afterwards i'll be right back to finish reading it. :D

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lost_xcentric March 8 2006, 21:21:24 UTC
ok...THX! :D...i was just comin to take it off, but ill leave it on a while longer! =) btw...im out of inspiration! *thumbs down* tut done? :p

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never_frugal March 9 2006, 02:49:23 UTC
I read it!!! It's fantastic, i loved the story! Thanks for leaving it on for an extra day. I can't write creative stories...so if you're looking for inspiration in that area i'm sorry but i can't help. i really do suck.

THANKS for writing this, it's a great story, i really enjoyed it :)

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lost_xcentric March 9 2006, 17:12:19 UTC
THANKS SO much...it wasnt even the final version too! haha...when i get it back (cuz i handed it in for school) ill put it up better! :D THX

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hoeyon March 9 2006, 08:53:28 UTC
Hey, got recc'ed here by never_frugal. This was a really interesting fic. May I friend you?

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lost_xcentric March 9 2006, 17:20:17 UTC
WOW Really? shes so sweet! uh yah sure! friends are love! :P and lmao, it was a narrative for school...i just put it here cuz we wernt alowed to email it to ourselves! i never meant for ppl to read it...and plus its totally different now! HAHA...wut ill do is when i get it back, ill put it on here...and make it proffesional looking! SQUEE! thanks much!!!!!!!!!! XD ...added u too!

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hoeyon March 10 2006, 05:08:48 UTC
Thanks so much.

It's a great story. I loved the glass plane imagery, especially.

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lost_xcentric March 10 2006, 13:39:03 UTC
THX XD

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hysteria__x March 10 2006, 15:56:57 UTC
Loved it, especially the dark, burning toast metaphors. Oh yes, you know you're going crazy when you start seeing dark metaphors in toast! =P haha

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lost_xcentric March 13 2006, 20:32:29 UTC
lmao

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