Title: Untitled. Suggestions? Pairing: Jane/Lisbon Prompt: Museum. For Boutondor. :) Rating: PG Summary: I don't wanna give it away...but it's pretty dark. Jane talks about his daughter.
Thank you so much!! I'm fairly new to writing, so I really appreciate your comments. :D Could you do me a favour and give me a prompt? I'm trying to write regularly, and getting inspiration is hard. I'd really appreciate it.
I actually like that title...Or maybe a little twist like, "Helping Him Cry." Thanks. :)
Thank you so much! You have no idea what your wonderful feedback means to me...Thank you so much. I certainly intend to keep writing, and I would love to add you to my f-list. New Mentalist friends are always great. :D
Aw, that was gorgeous, especially the last paragraph. I could totally see it. I can't believe you took a crappy prompt like "museum" and made something this wonderful out of it. Wow. Simply wow.
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Hmmm, title ideas? "Sometimes You Just Help Him Cry" sounded better in my head before I typed it... Will ponder.
Love your writing!
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Could you do me a favour and give me a prompt? I'm trying to write regularly, and getting inspiration is hard. I'd really appreciate it.
I actually like that title...Or maybe a little twist like, "Helping Him Cry." Thanks. :)
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Looking for fic ideas, eh? How about: Jane finds Lisbon napping on "his" couch. (And considers the Sleeping Beauty method of waking her up...?)
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Thank you so much. :D
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