What I liked about this one was how you made such an inherently silly situation feel so serious, at least for the first two-thirds or so of the story. It would've been easy to just laugh at what was going on but instead you made me feel Billy's weirdness and discomfort and embarassment. Nice job.
Thank you! It's always fun to take a look under the hood, as it were, and see what's happening at a deeper level. I find it especially fun to do that to Billy, even if it does make it harder to look him in the eye at conventions. ;)
I'll second angiepen's comment - you made a situation that was very comedy come across as thought provoking. And of course, I'm a sucker for the good old happy ending, and this didn't disappoint at all.
I'm delighted that you liked this, and that it worked the way it did for you. I share your love of happy endings, and I'm glad this one worked for you. Thank you so much for reading my story!
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