Fic: Progress

[v_angelique]

Title: Progress
Author: Viktoria Angelique (v_angelique)
Pairing: DM/BB/EW
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Thoroughly untrue.
Request: Dom/Billy/Elijah: Dom believes in love at first sight. Billy believes in love that grows, and Elijah doesn't believe in love at all. I want an angsty threesome fic that makes them all fall and fall hard. [Request by protoplasmica]
A/N: I'm

Comments

[msilverstar]

Oh yeahhhh. I really like the dynamic and a lot of the dialog, you really have a way with words.

"Oh come on, Billy. This is the twenty-first century, man! Don't you ever listen to Viggo? Love is fluid, and alive, and... all that shit."

In this one, it was the romance that really struck me, more than the smut. All of that longing and hope and tension and then Elijah the fixer (with a little help from his sister) finding a way to make it all work.

[v_angelique]

Yeah this is the second story I've brought in Hannah as Miss Push-in-the-right-direction for Elijah, hehe. What would he do without her?

I'm glad you liked the dialogue; it's one of my favourite things to write and probably the thing I can be most concerned about as well. *hugs*

[phentalon]

Awesome. I was hoping to get my mits on this plotbunny, but you did it *so* well! Lotsa thumbs up and cookies!

[v_angelique]

Aww, well I didn't mean to do any plot bunny stealage!! Next round I'm definitely going to try to stick to one or two... I always claim way too many hehe.

[phentalon]

Lol, I was at the lotrps plotbunny archive (whihc I now can't find D:) and claimed like 6, only to find they were taken, but no one had altered the journl and struck them out. :(