Oh. Oh, oh, wow. I don't even know where to start. I'd been eyeing this prompt since it was submitted, hoping someone would do it justice. This was just brilliant. You capture the fellowship dynamic absolutely perfectly. I love each of their personalities and methods of seduction- Brett's POV and Bean's gentleness and Viggo's crazy dancing and Sean A's unexpected sexiness and Ian's threat and Dom's sherbert lemmons and, and, and. It's all amazing.
And, of course, the last line made me laugh hysterically.
I am flabbergasted and immensely chuffed at your praise! I'm so glad that the Fellowship dynamic worked so well for you, and that their personalities were believable. I'd always wanted to write something with Brett in it, even though I know very little about him, so this gave me the perfect opportunity. I'm delighted that the actions of the others rang true to you. :)
The last two lines of the piece tapped me on the shoulder, knocked me over the head and wrote themselves as I watched. I cannot take responsibility for them. ;)
You did a marvelous job with a really difficult prompt - I was particularly taken with Dom's growing jealousy, which you wrote perfectly. Also, scorching sex! :-)
I melt under your praise! I'm very pleased that Dom's jealousy worked for you the way that it did. It's easy to get that wrong, and I always try to avoid writing it.
Such a compliment from you about a sex scene is worth far more than gold. I am most honoured. :)
This is absolutely brilliant... and exactly what I needed tonight. If I tried to quote my favorite bits I'd end up sitting here all night rereading (and end up with one hell of a comment, I'm sure) so I won't. It is just so perfectly naughty and light-hearted, with that undercurrent of something more serious, and the sex at the end is just perfect.
I can't tell you how much I love it when someone tells me that something I just happened to post was exactly what they needed when they read it. It makes me go all wibbly inside. :)
I'm so glad that you liked this so well, and that the sex worked. It was a challenging prompt, but I'm glad I didn't wimp out on it.
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And, of course, the last line made me laugh hysterically.
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The last two lines of the piece tapped me on the shoulder, knocked me over the head and wrote themselves as I watched. I cannot take responsibility for them. ;)
Thank you so much for reading this!
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Such a compliment from you about a sex scene is worth far more than gold. I am most honoured. :)
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I'm so glad that you liked this so well, and that the sex worked. It was a challenging prompt, but I'm glad I didn't wimp out on it.
Thank you so much for reading this!
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