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lissa_ann August 4 2010, 03:23:58 UTC
Wow. Really, really liked this one. Like the curve it took from IMToD. I mean, of course Dean would stick around and take care of Sammy, no matter what.

Really nice work. Congratulations.

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lotsayaoi August 4 2010, 04:04:34 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)

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feathertofly August 4 2010, 09:53:09 UTC
Oh my gosh, this is beautiful!! I absolutely loved what you did, twisting the canon in such a great way. It makes sense for Sam and Dean's connection to make him stronger. Part of me wants to get on my knees and BEG FOR MORE, but at the same time I love where you ended it. Cliffhanger!! Great job, thank you! :)

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lotsayaoi August 4 2010, 14:08:58 UTC
Well, as much as I like the idea of begging...;)

Thank you for your comments, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :D

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sn_143sn August 4 2010, 15:30:10 UTC
you realy got their voices down pat
I could imagine the canon characters in yours :D
Wonderful work

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lotsayaoi August 4 2010, 15:39:07 UTC
Thank you!! I worked hard to keep everything as realistic as possible, so I'm glad you appreciated that! :D

Thanks for reading!!

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dana_aeryn August 7 2010, 03:24:04 UTC
Really enjoyed this. it actually made me teary eyed by the end. I hope you write more in the universe because I would like to see what Sam and the Yellow eyed demon get up to and what happens to Dean.

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lotsayaoi August 7 2010, 03:48:22 UTC
Oh dear, I hope it was a good teary-eyed!!

There's no greater compliment than knowing people want more, so thank you very much! I was actually thinking about what might happen in a sequel this morning, so keep your fingers crossed and clap really loud!!

Thank you for reading!! :)

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manius_777 August 9 2010, 09:29:58 UTC
Damn, I want more! Really, I feel like it isn't finished! Like there is more, more to deal, more to dealing with being alive...
Damn, damn, damn! I SO would like to read a sequel... ;(

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lotsayaoi August 9 2010, 09:37:20 UTC
Oh, no! I hope feeling like there COULD be more didn't spoil it for you! :(

If it makes you feel any better, I've been thinking about what a sequel could/would entail, so there very well may be more someday!

Thank you for reading, I hope you liked it!!

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