OUaT: Stories, in the End (4/7)

[lotus0kid]

Rating: PG (a little more language and violence than you'd find in Disney, and possibly a smidge more sex)
Word Count: 1,086
Disclaimer: Recognize anything? Then it ain't mine.
A/N: Short chapter. Regina has her say, and there are some more feelings. Chapters posted every other day. For zombresSummary: Regina has been deposed, but the curse is still in

Comments

[raissad]

I'm very glad you brought up the fact that not all of them are royals. It would be a factor. Good job.

[lotus0kid]

Ye-eah, as I was writing it occured to me, like, hey wait a minute, if the curse is broken, a LOT of these people aren't going back to castles. Life sucked HARD for them, and then they died young of mostly treatable diseases. Sooo, hm.

[katje0711]

Hmmm. I do wonder how they would handle those that are worse off in Fairy Tale Land.

[lotus0kid]

I really don't know. At best, they'll forget their Storybrooke life, with the antibiotics and electricity. It's just too cruel otherwise.

[ddagent]

Great chapter! And I'm gonna agree with everyone about you bringing up everyone's place in Storybrooke. We only see the people who lost their happy endings. For a lot of people, it was a change for good.

[lotus0kid]

Thanks! It's a really tough situation, that's for sure. It's so easy for Belle to call it a curse with what she's gone through, but her experience isn't the same as an entire population's.

[zombres]

MY HEEEEEEART.

Okay, things I loved about this chapter:
01. Emma ushering Belle in theatrically and urging her to spit on Regina, LOL.
02. Regina's speech. OUCH, THAT ONE CUT.
03. "Who knew it was so simple to shred a heart?"

OUCH OUCH OUCH OUCH.

[lotus0kid]

XD

1. Emma was so sassy while I was writing, practically the whole fic. I loved it. Kinda made me like her character more.
2. Hurts because it's true, though. :(
3. FFFFFFFEEEELIIINNNNGS