Fic: Love is...

Feb 19, 2010 23:52

Title: Love is…
Author: lou_angel
Pairing/Fandom: Shelter, Zach/Shaun (external POVs)
Rating/Genre: G, fluff!
Words: 1295
Warnings/Spoilers Spoilers for the movie. A few OCs.
Summary: Written for Shelter_Diner Valentine’s Day Fest 2010 for the prompt: Cody telling a schoolmate how love comes in all sorts of ways, talking about his two dads.
A/N: My first ( Read more... )

genre:fluff, zach/shaun, fanfic, shelter, rating:g

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agent_jl36 February 20 2010, 02:53:28 UTC
Oooo! I think this may have been my prompt, or I posted something close to it. This is wonderful!! Kid's can be so open and honest and you really believe what Cody sees and feels. Yayz!

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lou_angel February 20 2010, 09:48:36 UTC
Well thank you for a wonderful prompt!

I'm glad you enjoyed this. Yes, kids can be so incredibly perceptive. I like the idea that Cody, given his not particularly easy early life, can still speak from such an open and uncynical place and in doing so comes out with something so real.

(Also, I am fascinated, possibily even hypnotised, by your icon)

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agent_jl36 February 20 2010, 23:01:54 UTC
I'm starting a writing class in a couple of weeks (a FANFICTION writing class whooo-hooo!) and may do a spin on this idea as well. Like a essay Cody has to read in school. Just thinking about it at this point... I'll see how the class goes!

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lou_angel February 20 2010, 23:50:21 UTC
Sounds like a good idea. The idea of Cody writing some sort of homework assignment about Zach & Shaun crossed my mind at one point but it didn't quite fit where I was trying to go. But it would be really awesome though :D

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dawning_star February 20 2010, 03:08:35 UTC
Awww, cute!

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lou_angel February 20 2010, 09:49:11 UTC
Thank you!

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lilyleia78 February 20 2010, 05:03:51 UTC
Cody is wise beyond his years.

Love this! ♥

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lou_angel February 20 2010, 09:49:51 UTC
Kids can be so profound sometimes.
Glad you enjoyed :D

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jasmine661 February 20 2010, 05:04:41 UTC
I like looking at Zach and Shaun through Cody's eyes, you did a great job! I so loved Cody and Zach saying "I love you" to each other.

Awesome line here-"Shaun said no, it was because Zach shouldn’t apologize for being who he is and he is awesome” I can totally picture Shaun saying those words!!

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lou_angel February 20 2010, 09:51:35 UTC
Thank you :D

(There is not enough Shaun in this fic I feel. I must do something about that in future)

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lil_1337 February 20 2010, 05:42:08 UTC
That was lovely. You did a great job with the child logic, they read like ten year old boys. The cake comment cracked me up because I knew exactly what he meant.

Thanks for giving me a smile.

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lou_angel February 20 2010, 09:52:38 UTC
I have a worrying feeling I still think like a ten year old sometimes.

I also strongly suspect I look at cake that way. Also tea. And shoes.

Thank you for reading and for your lovely comment :D

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