Comments | lou_c: Sentry (3/3)

lou_c

Sentry (3/3)

Dec 19, 2012 12:40

( The plan to investigate all goes to crap on Sunday afternoon when a black SUV side swipes the Camaro on the way back from the zoo. )

Comments 4

kcs_slayve December 19 2012, 23:17:12 UTC

We already know that they're going to get along great.

Loved this.

Delightful story.

Gracie's still smart as a whip.

Well done.

lyndalanz December 20 2012, 02:12:33 UTC

This was so good...and you have Danny down so well...I was laughing so hard during the robot and power strip conversation....

They are going to make a great team, both personally and professionally.

navyvet90 December 21 2012, 04:48:30 UTC

Outstanding! Great action and spot-on dialogue. Will there be a sequel about their 'date?'
(hint, hint)

tiffanie39 December 30 2012, 15:10:07 UTC

Love it! It's so different that its fabulous. Dont get me wrong I love the stories that stick to the show but I'm a sucker for a good AU.

Thanks for writing and sharing.