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[louiez77]

The ___ indicates the end of one poem and the begining of the next.

Please, please please, be honest, tell me which one you like best and why. I have to mail one into a contest by Sunday and I don't know which one I like best = /
This is where my friend (you) come in and give me criticism, compliments, complaints, advice, anything at all. Pretty

Comments

[blind_2_reality]

hey, I know I'm not going to be a ton of help, but I figured it'd be better then nothing

[anime_band_geek]

I think I like the first one the best, simply because it's so true. All of them are filled with such deep emotion and it's hard to pick one favorite. I definitely like the first one though. Good luck!