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Bitter & Twisted - Chapter Two: Ask The Dust.

Aug 11, 2006 01:29

Title: Bitter & Twisted
Author: louisestrange
Subject: 1990 - No one in the world for the old Lightning Flat ranch to go to when John Twist dies except the grandson he never met. Seems, though, that Bobby Twist might have another reason for wanting to go to Wyoming….
Disclaimer: Annie Proulx started it and she's the one reaping the financial rewards ( Read more... )

brokeback mountain, fanfic

Comments 13

Bitter and Twisted anonymous August 13 2006, 01:45:05 UTC

Hi Louise. I've just found your story Bitter and Twisted and am already keen to read more. You are a very talented writer with a good sense for atmosphere, detail and character. Your idea for this story - bringing together Bobby and Ennis on the Twist farm - is something I'd idly speculated about myself, but, since I have no writing talent, I'm glad to see someone else who has some talent is working on the idea. Please let us know when the next chapter is going to be up. I hope it will be soon.

amtamburo August 28 2006, 16:28:59 UTC

Trying not to be impatient or annoying but REALLY hoping that there will be more to this story soon...??

louisestrange August 30 2006, 18:44:54 UTC

You're neither impatient or annoying - I'm so pleased that someone out there is looking forward to an update!

Sorry for the delay - good ol' real life has been getting in the way of...well, everything fun, really. I have started work on Chapter Three and hope to post it early next week. I promise I'll try to update more frequently...thanks for checking in :)

Still waiting wayne1932 July 4 2007, 00:53:40 UTC

Just reread your story and feel empty with a resolution to what Bobby found when he met Ennis. Lots of opportunity for good plotting.

Please finish the story.

Don't give up! richardg49 September 17 2006, 03:10:30 UTC

Hi Again Louise

Here's another one who could be impatient and/or annoying, hoping to read more of this soon. Your story has started out so well and so full of promise for what might happen next. I sure hope we will see more of it soon. Don't let real lie get in your way!

story! dogsdontknowme January 6 2007, 05:28:04 UTC

You need to continue! I'm loving it.

Re: story! louisestrange January 15 2007, 21:00:17 UTC

I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story so far and thanks for letting me know! The guilt's been eating away at me and I do plan on picking up where I left off soon. Keep checking - I'm hoping to update at least by the end of the month.

Re: story! dogsdontknowme January 15 2007, 21:48:05 UTC

I love the perspective from which you're writing it. I'm looking forward to the next segment.

Update? geordie3 January 10 2007, 03:20:07 UTC

Is there any chance you will continue this? It's so good!

Re: Update? louisestrange January 15 2007, 20:58:41 UTC

I'm glad you've enjoyed this (short!) story so far - thanks so much for commenting. I'm sorry for the massive delay in updating - I do plan to continue the story in the very near future - keep checking back here! ~L