You Really Don't Care (One Shot)

Jan 27, 2011 04:15

Title: You Really Don't Care (One Shot)
Author: lov3s
Beta: withlightningPairing: Belldom ( Read more... )

[length] one shot, slash, [type] r, fanfiction, [fic] you really don't care, [pairing] belldom

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engel_sehnsucht January 26 2011, 20:35:45 UTC
Oh my god. That was beautiful. <33 You did really, really well with this prompt. <3

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lov3s January 26 2011, 20:42:18 UTC
You're so fast! I hadn't even posted it up for 10 minutes! Wow!

Thank you for that lovely comment. I'm glad that you thought I did well with the prompt. <3

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thekeyholder January 26 2011, 20:44:31 UTC
OHMYGAWD, this is my prompt!

will be back with a pwoper comment!

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lov3s January 26 2011, 20:46:19 UTC
REALLY?! OH MY GOD! I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT YOU ACTUALLY CROSSED MY MIND WHEN I WAS PUTTING THE FINISHING TOUCHES TO THIS STORY WHILE WONDERING WHO THE OP WAS!!! EEEEEEP!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

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thekeyholder January 26 2011, 21:06:46 UTC
LOL it was telepathy then? Or did you know that I like SOAD? I'm very very grateful! I think I go now, I have to make my luggage...

*hugs*

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ampliflyer January 26 2011, 20:47:54 UTC
\o/

Oh, love. This is gorgeous and quiet and resigned and stilled and so full of hurt, in a stunning way. I'm so proud of you, my darling. ♥

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lov3s January 27 2011, 09:50:27 UTC
I'm so proud of you, my darling. ♥

The best thing that could ever happen to me is knowing that I make you proud. Nothing could ever beat that feeling. Thank you, bb. <3

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easilyglorious January 26 2011, 20:52:03 UTC
Beautifully written, and so sad, you've left me speechless for long moments...

I dread to think it might be true...

*hugs*
<3333333

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lov3s January 27 2011, 09:53:19 UTC
you've left me speechless for long moments...

Oh, that's a first. I'm quite happy that I managed that because that was what I hoped to achieve in my reader's reactions.

I dread to think it might be true...

As for it being true or not, we will never know. But, yeah, it must be horrible if it ever was.

Thank you for reading, love. <3

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thekeyholder January 26 2011, 21:04:16 UTC
Oh, I would have never dreamed that someone takes this up, I'm so glad you are the filler! ^_^ I was/am a big System of a Down fan and ATWA is one of my fav songs from them... do you listen to them or just took this prompt up?

I've got nothing, to gain, to lose

I could afford it. I had no responsibilities, no partner to stay faithful to, no family to answer to, not even myself.

Well, I'm stunned, dear Jacinda. :') I still haven't recovered... this fic is so emotional from the first words!

Free of hurt, frustration, sadness, emotion. I couldn’t bear it. It was just too much. You were too much.

MATT, why you breaking his heart?! D:

She’s all that you see now, all that you need. You don’t need my arms wrapped around you, you don’t need my sweet caresses, you don’t need my kisses on your cheek, you don’t need me shooting you knowing looks once in a while. To put it simply; you just don’t need me.

All the words of this passage stabbed be in the heart. :'( *want to hug Dom*

I don't sleep, any more, I don't eat, any more, I don't ( ... )

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lov3s January 27 2011, 09:47:39 UTC
Well actually, I wasn't feeling good yesterday and I needed to get it out somehow, so I went on a prompt search. I saw yours and the lyrics you wanted to use, and thought, "Hey, that's close to how I feel, I could write this." And viola. That came out. And, no, I didn't know you like SOAD and I don't listen to them much, but I know who they are. (:

Well, I'm stunned, dear Jacinda. :') I still haven't recovered... this fic is so emotional from the first words!

I'm relieved that I managed to get some emotions across in this fic. When I wrote it, I thought it was quite vague and just pointless, but well, it turned out quite differently. :D

I'm afraid I can't express how much I loved this story. I'm happy that I managed to do your prompt some justice. And that this helped to calm you down for your exam. As for it going into your memories, that's just an honour for me. Thank you so much for that really, really nice comment, there. Good luck for your exam! <3

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