Wow! That was so intense and heartbreaking but beautifully written. You have weaved the story along the lyrics so well. I could actually feel Dom's sadness. What scares me is that this could be...could be just true.
That was so intense and heartbreaking but beautifully written.
You are too kind with your words, but thank you anyway. :D
You have weaved the story along the lyrics so well.
I was worried that what I've written might not have fitted well enough but seeing as you said that, I am glad it did.
What scares me is that this could be...could be just true.
I actually hadn't thought much about the real life when I was writing this, but after I read the comments, I realised. If it were ever true, it would be so damn heartbreaking and even more so because I've actually written about it.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, dear. <3
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Anyways, this was gorgeous!
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You are too kind with your words, but thank you anyway. :D
You have weaved the story along the lyrics so well.
I was worried that what I've written might not have fitted well enough but seeing as you said that, I am glad it did.
What scares me is that this could be...could be just true.
I actually hadn't thought much about the real life when I was writing this, but after I read the comments, I realised. If it were ever true, it would be so damn heartbreaking and even more so because I've actually written about it.
Thank you for your kind words. <3
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We even shared a hotel room together, because neither of us could sleep without having the other wrapped up in our arms.
I really loved this line. :)
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Anyway, thank you so much for reading this, and commenting. :D
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I loved it!
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