You Really Don't Care (One Shot)

Jan 27, 2011 04:15

Title: You Really Don't Care (One Shot)
Author: lov3s
Beta: withlightningPairing: Belldom ( Read more... )

[length] one shot, slash, [type] r, fanfiction, [fic] you really don't care, [pairing] belldom

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farawisa January 27 2011, 00:58:28 UTC
awww. so sad. poor dommie...

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lov3s January 27 2011, 15:05:01 UTC
Poor Dom indeed.

Thank you for reading and commenting, dear. <3

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ex_shayunkn January 27 2011, 03:19:19 UTC
wow. That was simply fantastic! I feel so sorry for poor Dom! Guh! Wonderful job!

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lov3s January 27 2011, 15:05:40 UTC
Thank you for that lovely comment, love! <3

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starlight_myth January 27 2011, 05:19:00 UTC
Wow! That was so intense and heartbreaking but beautifully written. You have weaved the story along the lyrics so well. I could actually feel Dom's sadness. What scares me is that this could be...could be just true.

Anyways, this was gorgeous!

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lov3s January 27 2011, 15:10:45 UTC
That was so intense and heartbreaking but beautifully written.

You are too kind with your words, but thank you anyway. :D

You have weaved the story along the lyrics so well.

I was worried that what I've written might not have fitted well enough but seeing as you said that, I am glad it did.

What scares me is that this could be...could be just true.

I actually hadn't thought much about the real life when I was writing this, but after I read the comments, I realised. If it were ever true, it would be so damn heartbreaking and even more so because I've actually written about it.

Thank you for your kind words. <3

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deepseabed January 27 2011, 18:05:45 UTC
This was sad, but I'm always attracted to this kind of stories.

We even shared a hotel room together, because neither of us could sleep without having the other wrapped up in our arms.

I really loved this line. :)

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lov3s January 27 2011, 18:16:02 UTC
Oh wow. I just squealed when I saw that you commented. I just kind of love your stories. :D

Anyway, thank you so much for reading this, and commenting. :D

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altogingenting January 27 2011, 18:10:16 UTC
Heartbreaking, but beautiful!

I loved it!

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lov3s January 27 2011, 18:17:13 UTC
:D Thank you!! <3

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