Fanfiction: Nowhere Near

Nov 08, 2010 11:07


 Title: Nowhere Near
Genre: Angst
Characters/Pairings: IchiRuki. Rukia's personal point of view narrated in second person.
Rating: K
Word Count: 378

Unknown to Ichigo, Rukia did come to Karakura,once. That was when she decided that staying away is the easier option.

It hits her, oh yes, it hits her hard... )

fanfiction, ichiruki, bleach, fandom

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sylphiawings November 8 2010, 20:38:36 UTC
my only negative comment for this fanfic; WHY ISN'T IT LONGER!? ;_;

this is exactly how I would imagine it if Rukia really did visit Ichigo after he lost his powers. you did it perfectly, and beautifully. kudos to you!

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lovahlies November 9 2010, 13:20:15 UTC
thank you so much ;-;

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lovahlies November 9 2010, 13:19:30 UTC
why isn't it longer? Honey if angst went too long, it becomes draggy. The perfect equation for angst is short and sweet ;)

Lmao, nah. It's just, I got this story in my mind as soon as I heard the chorus for Trading Yesterday's song and only Trading Yesterday. So I intended to make it short and sweet so it goes with the chorus.

Thank you so much bb ♥

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chefnem November 8 2010, 21:02:31 UTC
ARG
It's sad but hu >.<
Really well written, I still love it!

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lovahlies November 9 2010, 13:21:37 UTC
Then my intention to make this an angst-y story worked XD thank youu ♥

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vicious_melange November 8 2010, 21:50:54 UTC
Beautifully written <3

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elfishscallywag November 8 2010, 23:16:56 UTC
Your icon~!♥ Is there a larger version?

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vicious_melange November 9 2010, 13:47:58 UTC
Yeah, here: http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4916/9629134m.png (I think it's a fanart by USA USA)

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lovahlies November 9 2010, 13:22:30 UTC
Thank youu :D :D

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elfishscallywag November 8 2010, 23:18:39 UTC
Ah beautiful and so so sad. Exactly what I think would happen.

To be honest, I was kinda amazed people seem to only be talking about how bad it is for Ichigo and how depressed he is. But seriously, image the pain, imagine Rukia's pain when someone she has such a bond with can't even look at her no matter what happens...

It must be torturous.

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lovahlies November 9 2010, 13:25:38 UTC
Ahh thank you ♥

I know right? I guess it makes sense considering we only get Ichigo's point of view mostly in the manga but I really do think it won't be any less painful to Rukia either.

I agree, imagine the heartbreak ;-;

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wayfares November 9 2010, 06:20:36 UTC
i love everything about this fic, down the the picture at the end with the caption ♥ oh, ichigo and rukia angst.

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lovahlies November 9 2010, 13:27:13 UTC
and I love you for saying this, this made my day ♥
yes, we all need a little dose of Ichigo Rukia angst once in a while ;)

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