Searching For Life- Chapter Three (Logan/Veronica, Logan/OFC, Keith) R

Jun 20, 2009 06:17

Title: Searching For Life- Chapter Three (4/?)
Author: love_is_epic
Rating: R
Warnings: Some rough language.
Word Count: 6551 this chapter; 22,016 total.
Characters/Pairings: Logan/Veronica, Logan/OFC, Keith, various others.
Spoilers: Goes AU during 3x13 (Post-Game Mortem).
Disclaimer: I do not own any of Veronica Mars or its characters. I do not ( Read more... )

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vanessagalore June 22 2009, 04:26:24 UTC
I thought that was a really good choice to use the Camelot scene as an anchor for this chapter. It's interesting to see how you're using memories being reconstructed for these two, and the way that Veronica sees Logan with fresh eyes in a way that was never possible before. It's almost like they can rewrite the pain of their history by rediscovering it together, even though there's new pain and grief now from their time apart.

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love_is_epic July 3 2009, 01:33:20 UTC
Thank you! The Camelot scene was one of the first ones I wrote in the whole fic. I loved the thought of going back to where it all started (at least for LoVe) in a fic about finding what's been missing. Like you said, it's nice that Logan can be there for Veronica this time, but it's painful for him, too.

Thanks for reading and commenting! It really mean a lot to me : )

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tiguhgirl June 22 2009, 04:58:10 UTC
Great chapter! The emotional rollercoaster you are putting Logan through is just heartbreaking. I can't wait to see where you take this :)

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love_is_epic July 3 2009, 01:34:19 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it : ) Sometimes I love being a little too mean to Logan, lol.

I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment!

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fickledame June 22 2009, 10:52:25 UTC
What a brilliant chapter. I'm in tears now! It's so sad she had to remember those particular memories, hopefully some of the most painful ones out of the way, although I guess there is still plenty more to come.

Sarah may have been good for Logan at that time of his life, but Veronica is the love of his life, and I hope he realises he has to leave Sarah soon, for her sake especially.

I look forward to more soon, I hope!

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love_is_epic July 3 2009, 01:36:38 UTC
Thank you so much! That's a very nice compliment! You're right, there are lots of painful memories to choose from; I'm not sure at this point how many Veronica will relive though. Girl deserves a little break, lol.

Very true. Sarah was a placeholder, she just didn't know it.

There will be more sooner than later ; )

Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it!

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danceinacircle June 22 2009, 11:31:43 UTC
Gah. As usual, you make me fail at words. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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love_is_epic July 3 2009, 01:37:19 UTC
Thank you!!!

I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! It means a lot : )

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acinogan June 22 2009, 12:13:24 UTC
crap! i got so caught up in that part i like so much, i missed a typo.

**On top of everything else, it was too much to realize those words from Veronica’s lips meant tens times more than the same ones from his wife’s only hours earlier.

OBVS not miraculous *eyeroll*

ETA: oh, hey, look, icon twins.

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love_is_epic July 3 2009, 01:38:39 UTC
Crap... a typo. After all we went through... or all you went through. hee!

But you are a miracle worker ; )

Ah, I love it when we're icon twins ; )

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