VM fic: "Searching For Life" Chapter Four 5/7 (Logan/Veronica) R

[love_is_epic]

Title: Searching For Life- Chapter Four (5/7)
Author: love_is_epic
Rating: R
Warnings: What can I say? Logan and Veronica have real potty mouths this time around.
Word Count: 6222 this chapter; 28,238 total.
Characters/Pairings: Logan/Veronica, Logan/OFC, Keith, various others.
Spoilers: Goes AU during 3x13 (Post-Game Mortem).
Disclaimer: I do not

Comments

[afrocurl]

Now for the things I didn't write in that beta draft...

This is so not a healthy situation for either Logan or Veronica, but they can't help it, and it's hard to read, much as I want to.

There's too much pain and too many years between them before we ever start on the fact that Veronica doesn't remember most of him.

Excellent as usual, R.

[love_is_epic]

It's what Logan and Veronica do best - unhealthy ; ) It's hard for me to write so I can see it being hard to read. At least I know what's going to happen ; )

I love stretching Epic as far as I can take it : )

Thanks, R!!! That means so much to me : ) And of course, I can't thank you enough for the quick beta. You asked the hard questions that I didn't want to ask myself. I'm much happier with the result! Thank you!

[celtic_flicka]

Your cliffhangers are killing me!

I really loved Veronica's blowup--not only did she say things that needed to be said, but it was finally a flash of the real Veronica.

[love_is_epic]

Oh, come on... that one wasn't even a cliffy. Just wait till next chapter. Hehehhehhehhehhe!

I thought it was about time Veronica started becoming Veronica. It was nice to be able to write her with some attitude : )

Thanks so much for reading! Your comments always mean so much to me : )

[isdon_isgood9]

Oh god your killing me here. I'm so scared his actually going to stay with Sarah but I know your LoVer so you wouldn't do that. Argh. I need the next chapter it's just that simple. Cause at the moment my brain isn't doing much expect commanding my eyes to cry and it's not fair. It's just not fair. And I really have nothing else to say (which is that not fair part) and that's it.

[isdon_isgood9]

Okay so I suck at giving comments straight after reading a story so I'm going to try again and see if it doesn't sound insane.

I loved the emotion in Logan/Veronica/Sarah scene, particularly Sarah's response to the whole Logan/Veronica fight. It made me cry, it was so heart breaking.

I can't wait to see what Logan's going to do about the whole situation. I love that he's trying to be faithful to his wife but failing miserably. I like how Sarah keeps trying really hard to stand by him but just can't take it anymore.

I hope you update soon cause I really want to see what Logan's going to do and as impressed as I am that you got this done in time I'm a little mad too cause you just made voting for this round ten times harder(lol:p)

[love_is_epic]

I don't give very good comments right away, either, so you're not alone: )

There just isn't any easy solution for these characters. Any way you throw it - someone is going to end up hurt. I've really put through the ringer this time around and I'm afraid it will only get worse.

I'm hoping the next chapter won't take nearly as long ; ) It was actually part of this one but it go to darn long, I had to split it. Voting in gameon is always hard for me anyway, lol. I appreciate the sentiment.

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment, Don! I appreciate you taking the time to do so!!

[dragynflies]

Man, I love this fic. You write such beautiful angst, it just makes my heart ache. Poor Veronica and poor Logan...and poor Sarah. No one wins!

[love_is_epic]

What a nice compliment! Thank you! I've tried writing this so there is no easy solution. I'm glad you think that, too : )

I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment!

[tiguhgirl]

Uhh, so heartbreaking! I can't even form a proper comment...that was such an emotional rollercoaster!! I can't wait to see where you take this. There are just so many possiblities!

Great job, hon!

[love_is_epic]

Thank you! I love that you find it heartbreaking because it's that way when I write it, too. I love these characters so much that I feel bad that I have to put them through so much. I'm afraid there isn't going to be an easy end to any of it, either.

I really appreciate your reading and commenting on my fic! It means a lot : )