Stop Crumbling the Cookie!

Oct 11, 2010 21:38

Title: Stop crumbling the cookie!
Characters: DBSK
Pairings: mostly yunjae, yusoo
Genre: humour, highschool, a bit cracky
Length: chaptered
Rating:pg
Summary: Jaejoong just got dumped by his super hot boyfriend and drags his friend to a frat party. But when he gets a little too drunk and ends up getting almost everyone he meets as drunk as he is, things ( Read more... )

fanfiction, stop crumbling the cookie, yunjae, highschool, cracky, yoosu, humour

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samunin October 12 2010, 01:39:54 UTC
MY SPOT! GRRR
NO ONE TAKE!
BRB

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samunin October 12 2010, 01:49:33 UTC
OMG
JAEJAE IS JUST TO FUNNY
HAHA
wow they came up w/ a danger code when they were 10? XD
nice thinking yunjae!
lmao jaejae totally made it obvious he was getting kidnapped by the mafia XD rofl
man those 4 gorilla men arent very smart..they are hilarious
but at least they arent trying to rape or do anything to them XD
poor junsu T-T
i hope yunho's parents are able to help (they are so freakin rich!)
cant wait for the next update! woot! <33

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kpopbee October 12 2010, 01:56:21 UTC
the kidnappers are so stupid!
Jaejoong's funniest person ever! I just can't stop laughing at him!

4 gorilla men are really amateur!!!

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dilovesyunjae October 12 2010, 02:00:42 UTC
yahhhhhhh~~~ cant wait, this is exciting!

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dandelion164 October 12 2010, 02:02:38 UTC
yay update!!!!

I keep saying this over and over : I LOVE JAE!!!!
his character is just soooooooooooooo interesting
poor susu T_T and yunho is just his usual lover-boy self
cant wait for the next update ^_^

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bexy31 October 12 2010, 02:15:26 UTC
Spot please~ ^w^

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bexy31 October 12 2010, 02:29:16 UTC
Whoo, YunChunMin to the rescue!! ^_^

Jae is so epcially awesome XDD Making the van crash into a hydrant, ha ha... And his taunting of the Gorilla Men ^_^ ♥

Poor Junsu :((( *huggles* Mean mafia parents T___T

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

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