Every word you chose was lyrical and beautiful, painting a picture for my mind to ruminate. This is just such a beautiful parallel to what might be the Break-Minato relationship, and something about this just breaks my heart entirely. I love the way you characterized Vincent, with his strange, awkward laugh and gestures and his tendency to misdirect questions, and Minato's quiet persistence, his steady presence that carried us through.
The last line was picturesque, and if I had any ounce of drawing talent, I would draw that.
I know you have been having a bad day today, Cal love, and I feel... helpless, being on this end of the screen and unable to reach forward and give you the solidarity you deserve. But... I just want to say that this fic made my day, so very much, and if there is anything I can do to make your day today, every day-- I would. I would.
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You are the most brilliant person I know.
Every word you chose was lyrical and beautiful, painting a picture for my mind to ruminate. This is just such a beautiful parallel to what might be the Break-Minato relationship, and something about this just breaks my heart entirely. I love the way you characterized Vincent, with his strange, awkward laugh and gestures and his tendency to misdirect questions, and Minato's quiet persistence, his steady presence that carried us through.
The last line was picturesque, and if I had any ounce of drawing talent, I would draw that.
I know you have been having a bad day today, Cal love, and I feel... helpless, being on this end of the screen and unable to reach forward and give you the solidarity you deserve. But... I just want to say that this fic made my day, so very much, and if there is anything I can do to make your day today, every day-- I would. I would.
Thank you so much, love. Thank you.
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