Uh, only thing is, for proper grammer purposes, those should be reversed. Daroch and me, yeah. Daroch and I. Also, some minor spelling errors like adding a D to an and making it AND. Just things like that. Can't wait for the second part lovey! I always love your little yaoi stories... teehee.
Haha. I changed my math teachers little 'news alert' white board because he spelled 'blessed' blest and I was freaking out the whole class. I'm a grammer freak if I know it's wrong.
OMG! Look who actually read a story! XO Yay!!! Dude! That was very intruiging!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Let me know when it's finished! XXDXDXDXD
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Uh, only thing is, for proper grammer purposes, those should be reversed. Daroch and me, yeah. Daroch and I. Also, some minor spelling errors like adding a D to an and making it AND. Just things like that. Can't wait for the second part lovey! I always love your little yaoi stories... teehee.
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Next one's coming soon, glad you liked it ^^
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I did that to my french teacher the other day...oh yeah...FRENCH....i'm so sad
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-LBB
P.S. OMG! XD
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The next one is out now ^^
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