Erosion - Part III - rejeneration

[rejeneration]

Title: Erosion
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen.
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica
Word Count: Part III: 7500
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Love, actually.
Spoilers/Warnings: Season 2; This is FF.
A/N: Part three of the loveathons Epic Challenge. I've been crazy busy, so this part took me a week longer than I anticipated. If I hadn't taken time off to celebrate

Comments

[berry_hearts]

ooh. drama drama drama.
very nice jen! :D

[afrocurl]

Jen--you may have just killed me with the angst in this.

The constant back and forth of power between Logan and Veronica was hot and necessary to get to that endng.

I think, if nothing else, Logan learned that sex and Veronica are a dangerous combination. I'm not so sure that he'll be able to live up to his own stipulations, but I'm sure he's going to try.

Small typo: if you're talking about Tom as a fiance, there's only one e. The second e would make Tom a girl and I don't think that actually happened.

[goldenmelisande]

Lovely. I'm not generally too fond of pregnancy fics, but if anyone can pull it off, it's you. Excellent writing, and I loved when Logan was in the maternity ward. I'm looking forward to the next part!

[inthevast]

I really love the writing in this but I don't think I like Veronica anymore.

[douladiva]

Hooray for updates! I was thinking about this fic not two days ago and hoping for more. Prayer works!

I hadn't thought of it at all during parts 1&2, but as soon as V started answering the litany of questions my brain whirred to SHIT OH SHIT! She's pregnant. And then she is. I enjoy your writing so much that I have every confidence that the pregnancy will further the characters rather than hamper their development.

And your back and forth between flashback and present was beautifully done. Can't wait to read more!