So I'm back with my full comments, which are very few because I'm still missing my moment.
You're such a good tease at finding the right moment to have this proposal take place, seriously. I'm very curious as to what animal Logan went and found at the store, but as I said earlier, I'll be good and wait.
Hospital smut: always a good idea, really.
I'm tired, and out of things to say, except that tomorrow's epiologue better be wonderfully magical after making me wait months for it.
I LOVE The Philidelphia Story! Too bad my ex still has my copy....
I really liked how you brought Trina back in. They had a lovely moment. Also....I liked that V got a bit of closure here with Lamb... it might be my love for Michael Muhney getting in the way, but I can't help but smile a bit for Lamb at Veronica's admission.
It warms my heart that Logan feels so at home with Keith and Alicia, but I also loved the notion that he and Felicia will follow V anywhere. No doubt V will say yes now, after her sweet little confession in his hospital room.
And, yes.... the much anticipated proposal..... I thought you had said that you already wrote it? Hmmmm.... :) Awaiting teh epilogue almost as much as the previews for 3x02!
The proposal has been written forever - I just used it as a hook so people will read the epilogue. I have to finish things off and set them up for the sequel!
I never meant to turn Logan into such a chick flick watcher, but I figure the screwball comedies are respectable enough... It's not like he's watching Beaches. Hee. Yet.
Aww. I really loved this! Just the happy fluff I needed after hell yesterday was. I can't wait for the epilogue! And also, I loved the line from Monty Python at the beginning. That movie is hysterical!
I totally know what the stuffed animal is! I feel so wise! (Now, I hope I'm not wrong.) I have commented before on how much I have loved this story, and this chapter continues the trend. I also liked bringing in Trina (she comes across like I think she would) and I think you wrapped it up well, without being too cheesy. Although I am still curious about if they go back to DC or what. And of course, smut is always a nice addition to any chapter. Now, I'm just waiting for the epilogue along with everyone else!
It's still a great story and I was a tad paranoid Keith was going to walk in on them in the hospital room, so I'm really glad that didn't happen! He'd probably stop talking to them both for weeks for mortifying him like that if he had walked in. I can't wait for the proposal! I think I know what Logan got and if he did, I'm going to squee :)
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You're such a good tease at finding the right moment to have this proposal take place, seriously. I'm very curious as to what animal Logan went and found at the store, but as I said earlier, I'll be good and wait.
Hospital smut: always a good idea, really.
I'm tired, and out of things to say, except that tomorrow's epiologue better be wonderfully magical after making me wait months for it.
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I hope it lives up to your expectations! And I hope I can really finish the eppie tonight!
*goes back to writing furiously*
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I really liked how you brought Trina back in. They had a lovely moment. Also....I liked that V got a bit of closure here with Lamb... it might be my love for Michael Muhney getting in the way, but I can't help but smile a bit for Lamb at Veronica's admission.
It warms my heart that Logan feels so at home with Keith and Alicia, but I also loved the notion that he and Felicia will follow V anywhere. No doubt V will say yes now, after her sweet little confession in his hospital room.
And, yes.... the much anticipated proposal..... I thought you had said that you already wrote it? Hmmmm.... :) Awaiting teh epilogue almost as much as the previews for 3x02!
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I never meant to turn Logan into such a chick flick watcher, but I figure the screwball comedies are respectable enough... It's not like he's watching Beaches. Hee. Yet.
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