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When I Was A Child (4/4) - sarah_p

Oct 29, 2006 01:52

Title: When I Was A Child (4/4)
Author: Sarah :)
Pairing/Characters: Logan/Veronica, Dick, Keith, Weevil
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through 2x22, Not Pictured, just to be safe, but nothing specific. This is futurefic!
Word Count: 5,217
Summary: Nothing stays the same forever. Logan and Veronica's daughter Mandy finds out just how true this is.
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rowanceleste October 29 2006, 15:06:16 UTC

That was adorable...Mandy loves her little brother and hey, she's good at distracting him so Logan and Veronica can have more sex!

sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:57:08 UTC

EXACTLY! I'm sure Logan and Veronica will soon realize what a goldmine they have there, and not mind giving up that extra cookie. Mandy earned it ;).

SEE, I POSTED! I FEEL BETTER NOW.

Thanks for staying with this fic until the end...despite the fact it took me FOREVER TO POST IT :).

sweetumms33 October 29 2006, 15:21:33 UTC

So cute!!!! Please please write an epilouge. I want to see Mandy as an adult, realizing all the stuff she did, it would be awesome.

Great job!

sarah_p October 29 2006, 15:59:01 UTC

Every time I think about it, every time I'm MORE sure there will probably be more Mandy in the future...and, ooh, adult Mandy would be *interesting.* WICKED HARD to write, without all of her innuendo and naivete (heh), but...I will NOT RULE IT OUT.

I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting :).

jacedesbff October 29 2006, 19:02:04 UTC

Yay! I'd love to see something written when she's 11 and Sammy's 5. Oh, the trouble they could create. Hee! Loved it!!!

sarah_p October 29 2006, 19:58:05 UTC

He'd totally be her sidekick, and there would be mischief and antics! MAN. NOW I WANT TO WRITE IT. I need SOME kind of breather, yo! ;)

anonymous October 29 2006, 15:31:01 UTC

I absolutly loved the ending! Mandy is just like her daddy! I thought that was so sweet Mandy and baby Sammy in the crib.

bookjamprincess October 29 2006, 15:46:06 UTC

Totally awesome. This chapter made me laugh like all the others.

sarah_p October 29 2006, 16:02:03 UTC

The main reason I was so worried about posting this chapter is BECAUSE it's not as funny as the others...in the same ways, at least. I mean, it's HARD to squeeze all the dirty jokes in around OMG!GIVING birth, you know ;)? I'm so glad it made you laugh, and THANK YOU for reading!

:)

sarah_p October 29 2006, 16:00:28 UTC

Yay! I was worried the ending was too cheesy, so I'm really glad you liked it. I mean, what could be CUTER than Mandy and Sammy together in the crib? *pets them*

Mandy IS so much a mini!Logan! I'm glad it comes through :). Thanks so much for reading!

mer_maidrachel October 29 2006, 15:54:34 UTC

Loved the ending it was so sweet. I hope you use Mandy in the future for a sequel that would be awsome to see her as a teenager.

sarah_p October 29 2006, 19:40:14 UTC

Oh, MAN, can you imagine how Logan would react to Teen!Mandy dating? Heeeee. That would be a fic all on it's own. I AM pretty sure there'll be more Mandy, so I think once my brain recovers from this, I'll see where I'm at ;).

I'm so glad that you liked this, and so glad that you kept reading. Thaaank you :).

la623 October 29 2006, 16:50:38 UTC

Awww...it's over! This was such a great chapter...I loved it...the ending was so sweet...

sarah_p October 29 2006, 19:47:31 UTC

It's still kind of weird to me that it's over...cause as long as I didn't post, I still had the story, you know? It makes me so happy that you liked how it all ended, though! Thanks :).