I love the set-up of this, all these poker games though the years. The first part was so good, the tone so nostalgic it made me extremely wistful and it read just like something that would have actually happened.
“So pretty, always prettier than Lilly. The prettiest flower prettier than the flower,” Logan intoned, sing-song, as sleep and alcohol clouded his brain.
You have drunk Logan down, as well as his feelings, realized or not for Veronica.
The 2nd part, with Veronica comforting Logan was also completely true to their characters, as well as her avoidance and deep hurt to his actions. Anyway next part!
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LJ hates me too, i hate posting in multiple parts when its a one shot.
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“So pretty, always prettier than Lilly. The prettiest flower prettier than the flower,” Logan intoned, sing-song, as sleep and alcohol clouded his brain.
You have drunk Logan down, as well as his feelings, realized or not for Veronica.
The 2nd part, with Veronica comforting Logan was also completely true to their characters, as well as her avoidance and deep hurt to his actions. Anyway next part!
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