Erosion Part V (Veronica/Logan) PG [WIP]

Aug 22, 2007 18:15

Title: Erosion
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen.
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Tom, Trina, Xavier, smidge o’ the Wallace Fennel
Word Count: Part V: 3880
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part PG
Summary: Love, actually.
Spoilers/Warnings: Season 2; This is FF.
A/N: A million years ago I started writing a story. Since then I have gone on to dabble ( Read more... )

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YAY sly_mouse August 23 2007, 00:33:39 UTC
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I'm so glad you updated!! Tom is a bit creepy...did not see that one coming. Liked seeing the message from Wallace. Love the idea of Trina growing up and getting her shit together and her and Logan forming a relationship. Please please continue!

Also wanted to mention for future story ideas...there's nothing like a SPN/VM crossover!

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Re: YAY rejeneration August 27 2007, 18:10:13 UTC
Um... one thing I will never do? SPN-crossover. Especially with VM. -grin- There's no taint on my boys. -shakes head vehemently-

I'm glad everyone seemed to love the maturation of Logan's relationship with Trina. I'm trying to get most of the original cast into this story with some kind of growth or change. -smiling-

Honestly, you're one of the reasons I even went back to the story. Between you and another four or five saying "please update!!1! omg!" I was all like, "hmm." Since there's interest in me finishing it, I suppose I'll have to.

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douladiva August 23 2007, 01:06:06 UTC
You made me so very happy by posting this!!

This is absolutely the most believable far-flung future fic I have ever read of Logan and Veronica. Please continue posting on this. The voices you give them, specifically Logan in this chapter, are perfectly them, just a little older and wiser. And I love it.

Please, post more. The fact that there will never be new episodes makes it all the more important that you help the world and post a little VM!

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rejeneration August 27 2007, 18:12:42 UTC
Yay for spreading zee happy!! -grin-

This is absolutely the most believable far-flung future fic I have ever read of Logan and Veronica.

It's hard, and I've struggled, with how far I can push the envelope on keeping things believable, but also dramarific. -grin- I'm so thrilled to hear that this works and that the voices, while showing growth, still sound like them. This piece needs more Veronica, though. I'm such a Logancentric writer.

I promise, more coming ... soonishly. I just wanted to be sure there was still interest before I invested anymore time in it. I _love_ writing SPN. -grin-

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Thank GOODNESS!!!! katjs11 August 23 2007, 01:17:29 UTC
I am THRILLED to see this updated!!! I will consider this my own personal birthday present from you. and YES!!! KEEP WRITING THIS!!!

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Re: Thank GOODNESS!!!! rejeneration August 27 2007, 18:13:55 UTC
When I posted this, I _totally_ thought of you and your birthday! -grin- So yes, happy birthday to YOU! I will keep writing. I seriously do love this story... I just had to be sure there was still interest. Without it, it's fairly pointless to work on something I'm not invested in. 'Cause I _love_ writing SPN.

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annie_oakley August 23 2007, 01:23:12 UTC
YES! I really, really wasn't expecting an update for this, no matter how MUCH I wanted one. I know how you feel about VM and everything, but thank you SO MUCH for continuing!

I adore your Logan voice. His confrontation with Tom was so IC, and all of his moments with his nephew were really sweet. I want him to be happy. And I want him to be happy with Veronica, because I think that's the only way he could be happy. I still have issues with Veronica, but I'm really rooting for them in this story.

Please finish!!

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rejeneration August 27 2007, 18:17:04 UTC
I really, really wasn't expecting an update for this, no matter how MUCH I wanted one.

And I really, really wasn't expecting to write anymore. I'm not even sure I _have_ a Veronica voice anymore. But it needles me to have written something and not have it finished. So since there's the interest, I'd better get on it, eh? -grin-

I adore your Logan voice. His confrontation with Tom was so IC, and all of his moments with his nephew were really sweet.

Thusfar, my favorite moments have been Logan seeing life through Xavier's eyes. Feeling his warm, trusting little hand in his. Realizing he can effectuate hope or inspiration in him. Understanding that he can do that with a child of his own... even if the child isn't his own. I love playing with Logan's growth as a person. Giving him more breadth, more depth.

Thank you so much for being here, sweetheart. I'm so glad you are!

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tiguhgirl August 23 2007, 03:23:24 UTC
I'm so glad you decided to start this up again!

The character voices were spot on, especially Logan. Can't wait for more updates!

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rejeneration August 27 2007, 18:17:43 UTC
I'm very happy Logan's voice continues to hold. -smiling- I've always felt very close to Logan.

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