this is passion, free from reason

Jan 18, 2010 22:15

this is passion, free from reason
yunho/changmin
nc-17
when law is reason, free from passion, what is love to two lawyers?

it's always say goodnight and go )

p: yunho/changmin

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doovlynsidhe January 19 2010, 03:44:55 UTC
SPOT!

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 03:46:23 UTC
omg ninja

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doovlynsidhe January 19 2010, 04:05:49 UTC
This is where I quote pretty much the entire fic back to you. >___<

- Micky Yoochun is a busy, busy man who doesn't have time to dick around and visit old high school friends. Known as a "genius composer" who can do no wrong with his tunes, his affection for Mickey Mouse boxers, and his open-secret motto of "I write from where magic lives," the entire country has been captivated by this smoky dandy boy with the cut-your-wrists songs.

Changmin had still been in law school when he had read about the undisclosed settlement between Park Productions and the Disney Corporation.

This is where I started laughing and I pretty much didn't stop for the rest of this fic. XD

- "Would you like to talk about it?" he ventures.

Fluffy!Lawyer Yunho has my heart forever.

- People like to pit them against one another for whatever reason, the two most promising junior associate attorneys, each from one of the two biggest rival law firms in the country. Aside from the fact that the judges simply like to see two young, attractive men at each other' ( ... )

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doovlynsidhe January 19 2010, 04:17:46 UTC
MOAR!!

- Changmin watches Yunho look over the document with a critical eye. God, Yunho is so gorgeous when he's concentrating. Eyes focused, lips pressed together in a way that draws your attention to their plumpness, the lower one calling out to be sucked on while the upper one boasts about its beautiful bow and beauty mark. Those lips lead your eyes to his sharp, angular jawline, so good to lick and kiss and nuzzle against, a curl of silghtly longer than unspoken regulation length black hair teasing at the jut of his jaw bone. Fucking hell, the gods sure made this one with a little more favor than the others.

Sexiest description of Yunho. And good lord, Changmin is such a creeper. *sobs* Iloveitsomuch.

- And then, the realization hits Changmin and Yunho at the same time.

She doesn't actually want to get divorced. She couldn't care less about the house or the assets or the confidentiality clause. She doesn't want the damn dog out of spite.

She wants Yoochun.

)))): Heartbreaking. Poor things.

- "People surprise you all the ( ... )

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myrobotvoice January 19 2010, 03:45:33 UTC
MY LIFE IS ME REFRESHING THIS PAGE TWICE A DAY AND I'M TOTALLY OKAY WITH THIS.

actual comment coming soon

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 03:46:37 UTC
LOLOLOLOL HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU ♥

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BRB doing the same thing as the commenter above me myrobotvoice January 19 2010, 04:35:32 UTC
Changmin had still been in law school when he had read about the undisclosed settlement between Park Productions and the Disney Corporation.

I sat there blinking for a second trying to imagine what this could be about. Then I laughed. And then I got sad, because … I think Yoochun should take a timeout when it comes to lawsuits.

Yunho smiles that damn smile of his and Changmin feels his leg twitch
JUST HIS LEG?! yeah, I thought it.

"And I'll tell everyone everything I saw when I walked in on you in bed with-"

Yoochun reaches over and tears the prenup into little shreds of nothing.
KIM JUNSU KIM JUNSU

"Wasn't a she," Yoochun interrupts quietly.
OMG WAS I RIGHT?

"You know how soulmates are meant for each other..."
EVEN. BETTER.

POLES INSTEAD OF HOLES OMG LAUGHING FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE

His career is a just an occupational requirement for getting him here at all.
That’s the requirement?! I’ll be back in a bit, I’m going to change my major. Law school can’t be THAT hard right? ….RIGHT?!

And for whatever reason, he always ( ... )

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Re: BRB doing the same thing as the commenter above me loveclouds January 19 2010, 04:44:55 UTC
...OH MY GOD, CRYING. THIS COMMENT IS SO AMAZING LMAO I LAUGHED SO MUCH ASDFKLJADSF I LOVE YOUUUUUU THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ;3;

omg dude, i wanted to talk about how glad i am i made you laugh so much and that you caught all of the lines that i loved the most as well but then i got distracted by:

39 HOUR SUPER MARIO BROS MARATHON HOLY SHIT I LOVE YOU I AM SUCH A HARDCORE NINTENDO FANGIRL ASDFKLJADSFJK which game. D: which system. D: LET'S TALK GEEK ;3;

♥ i love you ♥

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hoyah January 19 2010, 03:58:25 UTC
lawyer!au~ :D yay

lol i should have spotted, because i'm sure i must be on the second page or something by now, with how slow i read

ee i love that your yunhos are sometimes not so idealistic and more realistic with a touch of optimism

i love that yoochun doesn't necessarily end up with jaejoong even though it's otherwise canon

i love that byul shows that other side to love that isn't so selfless and altruistic as is romanticized (probably by song lyrics yoochun writes)

sfdjlasjldjf i love a lot of this

ngl, the ending took me a bit by surprise. not so much because of what happened, but the tone of it seemed so different from the rest. but still! i loved this :D

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 04:02:36 UTC
hi maaaaiiiii :D

i think it's important to see people in layers. instead of like, this is right, this is wrong, etc etc. i'm glad you liked it, and i'm glad you didn't hate byul LOL ♥ this was fun to write :3

did the ending seem different?? well, i'm happy you interpreted it in your own way, hope it doesn't seem out of left field to you. :333

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hoyah January 19 2010, 04:14:14 UTC
nah, i suspected they would get together someway or another. i just thought it'd be more dramatic and less lighthearted, considering. lol hope you don't mind the slight concrit. :D i reallyd id enjoy this

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 04:15:28 UTC
lol that was concrit? oh. LOLOLOL. nah, i don't mind. i was going for a lighthearted fic so sorry if i disappointed or misled you along the way LOL :x

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 04:03:00 UTC
AWWWWW :3333

hope you get off work soon. :) and i hope the fact that you're AT work means you're not sick anymore LOL

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 04:08:36 UTC


yeah, there's full blown smut in this, lmao. don't get yourself in trouble. XD

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kurogoma January 19 2010, 04:00:23 UTC
YAY!!!! /^O^\

i see what you did there...

runs off to read and will be back to flail comment and shower you with love

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 04:03:20 UTC
LOLOLOL YOU CAUGHT ME 8Dv

:3333 eeeeee ♥

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kurogoma January 19 2010, 07:43:02 UTC
♥♥♥♥

"Look at this!" he screams, turning to the last few pages, showing the older man all the scribbles of his name, "I drew a fucking heart around your name like I'm some prepubescent girl!! What are you going to do about this, you bastard!?"

my favorite favorite bit!! :DD if i were yunho and i saw changmin throwing away his manly cool self like this, i would fall in love all over again.:3

hotdogvendor!junsu was also all kinds of awesome, as for yoochun, i could feel how maybe jaejoong wasn't just a plaything for yoochun. and even though jaejoong didn't have a speaking role.....i could feel him emoting. yes, i can.

thanks for this, bb...your lighthearted homin always make my day a little bit more sunshiney. :D

oh, oh, and yes...forgot about the smut....it was hot...but when was homin smut ever not hot? ;)

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loveclouds January 19 2010, 18:25:59 UTC


I THINK YUNHO VERY WELL MIGHT HAVE! 8DDDD

i love hearing from you, ivy. ;_; you ALWAYS make my das a bit more sunshiney :))))

i love youuuu ♥

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