dress me up, dress me down

[loveclouds]

dress me up, dress me down
yunho/changmin
nc-17
when changmin pursues high fashion.

for apocryphalic. this isn't chicklit, this is dicklit. be warned of...everything!

Comments

[apocryphalic]

incoherent.

"You never call me hyung."
Changmin scowls and makes a face. "I don't have wet dreams about you either. Do you want that to change?"

hyung. i love you. and i want coffee the way homin have it. jkfgnskggk jaejoong, my brain D: dude don't write fic so late anymore : ( i'm too old to stay awake and read it. look at me, i'm all dead.

i love you T.T

"I can't think of any threats right now because Yunho's clinging to my leg and crying YES YOU ARE SO CRYING so I'm hanging up on you. It was nice to meet you and I look forward to the wedding invitations."
sobbing, i love jaejoong, i really do. stop making him so fantastic and letting him steal the fic : l it's about homin! speaking of which, all this talk of armani and i don't see anything about yunho in a suit all the fucking time altho he's a model and that's a given, salivates D:

and i love yoochun a lot. he's appropriately sarcastic and sweet and ugh, yoochun. be my dandy boy? do you need some of this btw? xDD
"For sure! I've got so many backlogged that they're like

[loveclouds]

lmfao this comment is so incoherent. YOU ARE CLEARLY NOT MADE FOR ALL NIGHTERS D:<

it's okay, i still love you. ♥

roflrofl lisa is just a character i needed because i wanted to call people wankers. :( the end :(((( though if you want to pair her up with jaejoong, by all means! she can do his hair and stuff :(

♥ i should've talked more about yunho strutting down the catwalk in suits :(((( ;A;

[heartbeatclouds]

I truly loved reading this ♥♥
Thank you so much for writing this! :D

I love how Changmin is all clumsy here towards Yunho!
Thanks again ♥♥.

[loveclouds]

you're very welcome. :) i love when changmin's just a bit clumsy and adorable. :D glad you liked!

[tayanika]

hot sex as a finishing touch never cease to amaze me ;)

I love how this fic is all well written bb!

read it the second I caught glimpse of it on my message box XD

[loveclouds]

agreed, can't go wrong with smut ;D

hahahaha thanks a bunch! i'm glad you liked :D

[krillia]

That was adorable. Your Jaejoong and Yoochun were total love (...am I supposed to be noting that in a HoMin fic?) and "he's a bit neurotic" made me giggle.

...

... ...*hides*

If you don't mind mentioning of typos, I noticed two. Both incredibly tiny and barely worth mentioning. The first during Jaejoong's phone conversation, where you wrote '"he didn't go up for coffee with you because he thought it was the right thing to do, okay?"'Unless I'm being an ignoramus and it's a dialect thing I'm not aware up, it should be 'out for coffee'.

The second during the sex scene, where you simply miss a capitalization on Min's name: "He can feel his own orgasm closing in and redoubles his efforts to thrust harder and faster and deeper, his balls slapping changmin's ass with the force of his thrusts" (...I think the fact that I just C&Pd THAT should prove that I am not trying to be malicious in pointing these out).

If you don't care, I'm sorry for bothering you by pointing them out.

[loveclouds]

LMFAO YOU ARE SO CUTE OMG ;3; ♥

and yes, it's alright, i love jaechun too lolololol. i write homin so often that i know they get stale so D: it's more than alright ahahahaha.

eeee thanks for pointing that out, i'll go fix it right away! the first one i meant when changmin invited yunho up to his place for coffee and yunho refused. :x though lololol i am so glad to see you're giving the smut a close reading ;D :P

♥ :3

[krillia]

Hey. Some people hate having mistakes pointed out. You're one of the most coherent writers in this corner of fandom, so it would be a crying shame if I made you throw a temper-tantrum of the "I'M TAKING MY TOYS AND GOING HOME!" sort.

the first one i meant when changmin invited yunho up to his place for coffee and yunho refused

Aaaah, ok. I read it (assuming typo) as Jaejoong saying that Yunho didn't go out with Min out of obligation, but because he wanted to. Yup, no typo then. Of course, you should know being the author and all. ^^;

As for noticing the capitalization. Um. That might be me being anal more than a careful reader. It's one of my pet peeves when people do it because they can't be bothered to capitalize, so I'm keyed to see it. (which I realize was not your intention in the slighest, otherwise I wouldn't have commented. Possibly at all). It was smut worth reading, though. ;p

[loveclouds]

eeeeeeeeeeeeee you flatter me ;D ♥ thank you :)))) my sleep-deprived face is like :D right now 8D

lol it's alright, i'm glad you caught it. as for my comments, I APOLOGIZE FOR THE LAPSLOCK ROFL ♥

[kuro_wolf]

O.M.G....
I am grinning so wide i think my face is splitting. kekeke
Note to self: Never eat whilst reading one of your HoMin. EVER!
I choked on my pizza twice! hehehe
Chunnie and Minnie's bff banter is fucking hilarious!
And the phonecall from Jae? WIN! LOLZ!
You so have a bias for Jae, kekekeke

[loveclouds]

I KNOWWWWWW lol my bias for jaejoong is so obvious that it's embarrassing ;A;

but whatever, he's fun!! :D i'm happy you enjoyed yourself! thanks for reading :D