Bet Me; Chapter 6; Introducing Mr and Mrs Reynolds

Mar 17, 2012 00:51



Here we are at Day 7 with the first new chapter of Bet Me in over 8 months. To say I’m nervous about re-launching this fic is an understatement. To those of you who’ve followed me over from FF, I thank you. To those of you who’ve commented, PMed me, and tweeted your support, I thank you. I’m writing outside my comfort zone, and I need my loyal/ ( Read more... )

damon and elena, bet me, fan fiction

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c1ashcityrocker March 16 2012, 15:09:13 UTC
Yay! Welcome back... Even knowing a new chapter was incoming, I was still excited as hell to see a new update today :) you didn't disappoint - I loved every moment of it, but I might be biased, lol I knew I would love it. I love the attraction these two have for each other, and /sigh... Poor poor Elena... Stuck in a beautiful paradise with Damon.. Lol... Creepy about the cameras tho, no matter how much Klaus tries to justify it.. Ugh. I hope they take him down hard..

Welcome back again hon. Soo happy to see you writing this one again :)

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loveepiclove April 25 2012, 11:45:03 UTC
Thanks hun. I'm always really excited to see your reviews. Always, and I enjoyed reading them for every chapter.

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sb97979 March 16 2012, 15:17:53 UTC
Well, you have reappeared with a bang! Great new chapter, and seriously you have nothing to be nervous about. This story is hilarious (loved the dvd collection!) and intense by turns. Can't wait to see what happens the first night!

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loveepiclove April 25 2012, 11:45:35 UTC
Glad you found this a little humorous :)

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siberia21 March 16 2012, 15:26:37 UTC
Oh sooo wonderful. I´m happy he saw she was attracted to him. If you intend the readers feel like grinning like crazy, hot, cold, frightend, excited, touched, entertained, curious, impatient (like telling the characters what to do to solve the problems) and patient to enjoy the ride at the same time - SUCCESS! I love love love LOVE this story and in fact it´s the best thing this whole (TV-show-spoilers-Delena-frustrating) week. Thank you Michelle, I can´t even understand why you´d think anyone could not like this story. It´s beautifully PERFECT!

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loveepiclove April 25 2012, 11:47:10 UTC
Thanks for your comment, I'm so happy you are loving it so far :)

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princessme385 March 16 2012, 15:33:45 UTC
And so it begins...

Why do I have a feeling that Damon and Elena will have a very hard time (no pun intended) abstaining for the required 3 days. Haha

Their chemistry and the tension between them jumps off the page. And you've already got Klaus giving me the creeps. *shudder*

I feel spoiled because I was like I can't wait for more tomorrow... haha but we're going to have to wait now. It's totally worth it! :)

I'm fully prepared for whatever this story brings. *sings* Hit me with your best shot! Lol

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loveepiclove April 25 2012, 11:48:47 UTC
Thanks for you incredible support on this story. <3

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mridul777 March 16 2012, 15:47:38 UTC
Essentially I want to write the extremely clichéd romance, in a not so clichéd setting. This story is crazy - far out - and ridiculous; like laugh out loud stupid in places. I make no attempt to pass it off as anything else. You need to go with it. If you’re after a realistic read, this story is not for you. LOL.

ALL the MORE reasons for me to stick on it like a LEECH!
Plus.. I have my quota of reading realistic stories filled.. all I came here to read and WANT to read are YOUR stories, and I know your type and for me to complain about it would be me not liking you and your work for who you are.... and that's something that I never ever do. :)

Damon was just looking at the stock of alcohol in the fridge, when Elena made a noise behind him.

"Oh my God."

He turned around to find her looking in the large cupboard next to the bed. He walked over to find out what had piqued her interest. On one side of the cupboard were costumes for both men and women, including a nurse's outfit, a Tarzan outfit, and leather S&M outfits.Soon as I read ( ... )

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loveepiclove April 25 2012, 11:49:59 UTC
I loved this review. The way you express yourself with pics is just awesome. I especially liked the Ryan Gosling one, because I am a massive, massive fan of RG.

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