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sombra07 June 22 2012, 21:43:10 UTC
I like your pic!

and I really like your story! I don't mind if it's without delena.
I think the tention between the two is amazing! I nearly felt my phone vibrating! :P

I would love to read a scene between the two where they are supposed to shoot a kissing scene and they get carried away in their own world and wow! :P
yes I am totally obvious and cheesy!!

I hope you don't let us wait too long for the next chap! ;)

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loveepiclove June 23 2012, 00:39:32 UTC
I'm so happy you decided to try this. Thank you for reading, and for your comment.

You can count on some cheesy stuff ;)

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Great start ext_1057557 June 22 2012, 22:44:29 UTC
I liked this story from the very first sentence, you have a way of doing that to me ;) But seriously, it's true - I really enjoyed this chapter and now can only hope for more

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Re: Great start loveepiclove June 23 2012, 00:38:11 UTC
What a lovely compliment. Thank you so, so much :)

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dreamssincerity June 22 2012, 23:25:13 UTC
Can't wait to read more :D

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loveepiclove June 23 2012, 00:37:47 UTC
Thanks bb <333

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emogirl_93 June 23 2012, 05:06:46 UTC
Awesome. Awesome. Awesome!! I love it ..really do!! :-D I have already pictured Ryan as the ultimate hottie! ;-)..cant wait to read more!

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loveepiclove June 23 2012, 05:14:42 UTC
So relieved you like it! :)

Yes, um, I'm rather attached to Ryan, and in my head he is definitely a hottie. *Giggles*. <333

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thess2002 June 23 2012, 07:11:10 UTC
I love it! I really hope you continue to work on this one. Can't wait to see Mac and Ryan to continue fighting their mutual attraction, although I believe it is a lost cause... :-)

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loveepiclove June 23 2012, 07:22:06 UTC
Thanks <3 Yep this one is totally going ahead. The fact that I've already written it means it's all plotted out. I'm changing a lot of it, but I still have the bones of it in there :)

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