Lights, Camera, Kiss Me; Chapter 3

Jul 06, 2012 20:34


Thanks Bex, for your magnificent feedback on this chapter. XO

Chapter 3 )

hart's valley, #lckm, ryan, romance, mac

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dark_spn_angel July 7 2012, 04:06:22 UTC
DAMN! Mac/Ryan dancing like that was awesome! Oh if only they could give in to their attraction to each other. They are definitely going to struggle with that attraction with their next season romance.

'Hopefully she [Mac] wouldn’t be sharing any scenes of a romantic nature with Ryan for a while.' --Boy is Mac in for a surprise when she finds out.

Fantastic chapter (and story)!
Update soon!!

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loveepiclove July 13 2012, 11:03:15 UTC
I love getting your comments!!!

Thanks for taking the time to read <333

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val_victrix July 7 2012, 22:41:32 UTC
That was one steamy dance scene. She's going to be in a panic when she finds out about the romantic developments in the script, but the viewers will love their chemistry on-screen (Ian and Nina come to mind lol)

So are they going to start filming soon? I'm really curious what'll happen next :)

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loveepiclove July 13 2012, 10:58:33 UTC
Yep, they're going to hit the set soon, and that will make everything more interesting lol. Thanks for taking the time to comment on the last three chaps. Really meant a lot <3

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knots_in_myhair July 8 2012, 03:19:42 UTC
Yay I was excited for this chapter! I love so much when you show things from both characters perspectives. From Mac's perspective, Ryan was just having a great time with his date, while she was clearly kinda bored with hers. I loved that when we switched to his side of things, all he is thinking about is her. I just love that. The dance was hot! I'm glad their obvious attraction is out in the open now. I can't wait for more. Thanks for the update!

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loveepiclove July 13 2012, 10:57:18 UTC
Thanks for reading <3

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mridul777 July 10 2012, 15:57:12 UTC
He let his lips trail down her neck, feeling her shiver as he did so. When he reached the pulse that was beating frantically at the base of her throat he kissed it softly, before flicking his tongue over it.


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loveepiclove July 13 2012, 10:48:36 UTC
This made me smile and feel happy. Thank you :)

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crazilyaddicted July 12 2012, 14:56:40 UTC
Yet another awesome chapter!!! The sexual tension - OMG!!!!!!!!! Cant wait to read what happens next!! I have a feeling this is going to be yet another LONG, drawn out journey down the relationship path. Sigh!!!!! Need to gear up for the long haul... ;) Update soon. Am waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter...

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loveepiclove July 13 2012, 10:49:05 UTC
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment <3

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